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by Lisa MacColl
Friday, February 27, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Not your average romantic poem.
EXCERPT from poem published in February 2007 |
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Do you know where he's going?
Do you know where he's been?
Do you know where he's going?
Would you make a scene?
Do you know who he's phoning?
Do you know where he'll be?
Do you know where he's going?
Do you know about me?
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| Reviewed by Lisa MacColl |
3/24/2009 |
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| Thanks Fee, I appreciate the feedback. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
3/1/2009 |
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This is definately one to evoke interest and wonderment. Like how you laid it out almost as if you are talking to yourself.
Welcome to the den,
Fee |
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