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| Reviewed by P. Zimmerman |
9/21/2011 |
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| You are so right Ms. Erika Dameraux maybe my poetry confused more than just you.. Right now nothing goes,( can't find him in rhyme.)Maybe you are one who knows.(how to find him) (so) Write it down we'll see if it flows (or we can just switch to prose cause someone will come up with an idea, and it could be fun.) Sorry for the confusion. Thanks so much for the review. |
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| Reviewed by erika dameraux (Reader) |
9/16/2011 |
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You are not writing prose
You are penning poetry,
That's why Randy came to me.
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