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Dream Repairs by Lynette N Bat-Abba Friday, July 09, 2010 Rated "G" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan

Leaving your body somewhere else you lay beside me hoping I'll notice your hands moved my pillow closer to the breast I know well as my own vacant until memory starts a murmur blood stopping for a brief moment long enough to remind me of life surging between restless sighs. I can smell the heat of brokenness waiting for my hands to find you while I sleep.

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Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi	10/29/2010

Very beautiful, perfect from the first line to the last. An excellent portrait of love, expressed in a moment.




Reviewed by richard cederberg	7/12/2010

as I read I felt a kind of celebration of inspiration here, acknowledging the (often) humdrum nature of living for what it is, and appreciating, and clinging to, the moments that bless us despite our inability to apprehend them. Peace to you dear friend ... richard




Reviewed by Joyce Bell	7/11/2010

THE IMAGERY IN THIS WORK IS WONDERFUL. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS




Reviewed by Paul Judges	7/11/2010

Excellent poem, Lynette




Reviewed by Regis Auffray	7/9/2010

I find this very compelling and moving, Lynette. Love and best wishes to you, Regis