Message to My Daughters (Dreamweaver's Challenge)
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Saturday, November 30, 2002
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Two multi-colored spirits of feminine nature,
entered my life with a bang, and I was afraid,
scared of the life-long commitment
that I had made, unworthy
of what beauty I was sent, feeling
my own mind was too heavily weighed,
As we muddled through the early years, my dears,
joy and wonderment filled me, as you played,
and I began my task of teaching,
values arrayed, unfolded,
with your fatherís reaching, seeing
your minds take up the crusade,
allaying my fears...
I give my gift of human compassion, my girls,
tolerance and respect, which will never fade,
and the worth of life-long commitment
to natureís parade, inclusive
of everything heavenly-sent, knowing,
though my bodyís decayed,
forever my love unfurls.
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|Reviewed by William M. Sowman
|Very nicely written Erin. Love comes out all through your poem. And think you for the news about the amber alert that is out for the kids. I reade it on Linda's site. I also have the article posted at my site and have been working all night to get it to as many as I can. We just got to find these kids. They are in grave danger now. Oh God please helps us save them.
Send them an Angel to protect them till we can find them. We need to do more so much more to find them. Thank you again Erin.
|Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
|Wonderful! ;) Sorry I didn't respond sooner, was busy busy busy over the Thanksgiving holidays and haven't had time to even write for a few weeks...and for me, That is Busy!
Thank you for the compliment on my writing name, I LOVE silver...the moon and being from Irish Descent...Celtic just was a natural thing to add.
|Reviewed by Ron Dondiego
|So elequent, yet very down to earth - your children are lucky to have such a poetic and lovely mom. Thanks, Ron|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|A jewel a rare one, just lovely.|
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|Reviewed by Theresa Koch
|This was a wonderful piece~|
|Reviewed by Jerry Andrews
|A very nice job, Erin- full of motherly love. Thanks- Jerry- and thank you for the good review you gave me. Come back any time, Erin, good review or not.|
|Reviewed by g g (Reader)
|Absolutely beautiful! Thank you!|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Beautifully done Erin...you capture all the important points with your imaginative expressions...|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|VERY NICE...do read my poem Aphrodite...lol.thats about my middle son ..will still get to the rest of my family..just need something funny enough
|Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J
|Lovely Erin, You have done good by them and this is a lovely write.
Love from India - Joel -
|Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
|Beautiful.. Thank you so much for taking up the challenge.. (smile)|