|Reviewed by CHANTI LACE
|lovely writing as always...|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a sad, passionate story nicely penned ...|
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|Any love story is a good one....awe...|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|How lovely, William. Have to admit that, for some reason, my mind wandered to the film The Sound of Music - guess it's the mixture of devout faith, innocence and rugged masculinity. Now I'm off... :) xx|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A sad story; but true love never ends so, to me, your verses offer a "silver lining." Thank you for sharing, William. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|I feel so sorry for the wife. It causes one to look at marriage much differently. Sad but lovely poem!
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Indian families have told me that their arranged marriages last because couples are carefully matched and the marriages are actually a joining of families.
The kind of idyllic marriage portrayed in your poem is fast fading. Even in countries where it is still practiced.
|Reviewed by John Domino
|As a military man I loved this poetic story. One of your BEST poems William! God Bless you my friend. Amen|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Tough to lose the love of your life|
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Beautiful poetic poem of epiphany.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by lois christensen
|A lovely love story. Thanks for sharing it William Bonilla.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Sad write, but with wonderful and meaningful memories for these two. Many of those arranged marriages did not fare so well.|