|Reviewed by Gabriel Abiah (Reader)
|Oh! this's Fantastic|
|Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
|Dedar William, I like your poem, but life is half in our hand and half is in other hands.
Let's enjoy what is ours
and let go of what is sour
|Reviewed by Keith Rowley
|Beautifully stated. In Afrikaans we used to say 'Brill & Pill' - spectacles and pills!|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Whole IDEA Is:
To Make Best Of What You Got Left!
Or You Can Always TEMPT Hands Of FATE!
Your Friend, TRASK....
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|In the blink of an eye, it passes us all by.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|time never went anywhere, it's life that moves on ...
really nice philosophical visualization ...
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|We have all lived long enough to see it happen. I wonder what we did before inhalers? We just croaked?
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|As long as we are here, we must serve a purpose. Helping others is mine I believe. Sure, time flies. We must make the most of every moment in some way.
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Giggle...and it goes by just that fast! Loved your take on how quickly time flies, William...
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|"How did it ever get to this
Overweight walking slow
Searching my pockets
For an inhaler"
Yes indeed, I can sadly relate, and I have moved on to a nebulizer. Still, I am upright, I have my senses about me, still a recent death has given me insight on what I should have done with my life. Too late, too late.
|Reviewed by John Domino
|We are all there, especially after the turkey day. But today I made riding my bike or walking at least 30 min every day a priority. Yes, if we don't use it we lose it.
Blessings my friend,
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|we all live this, it is better than the alternative
|Reviewed by Edward Phillips
|One step forward, two steps back. 16 pills then back to bed.
It's a losing game. Push up, push out, push on!
You said it better.
|Reviewed by Lark Pogue
|I don't know!! It did fly by, but even in my vanity I don't miss those hormonal and vanity filled days. I for one think you look great.