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|Reviewed by Andrea Williams
|Reviewed by E. Richardson
|I am not so sure this is dark as it is undeniably true...and sad.
This is a grand illustration of unseen and or ignored injury....whether on a personal level or world level. Well done, my friend.
|Reviewed by Art Sun
|Isn't it so, as the splinter that hides beneath the skin giving one pain and yet so small that one cannot see it, only feel it's presence....your thoughts just like the heart that beats and bleeds from broken dreams and the hopelessness of life....
really nice work....
|Reviewed by Vesna Blueflame
|I hear you..
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Sad and all too real. Excellent. 'Pea' <3|
|Reviewed by Cles Wilson
|This is good.|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
Some splinters run deeper than what healing will allow. Excellent writting.
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|A sense of hopelessness in this one. Good write.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Very dark poetry like only you can do it!!
Well penned Erica....so good to read you again!!
|Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
|Vwey dark! Well written.|