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Your Metaphor
by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
Sunday, May 19, 2013
Rated "G" by the Author.
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YOUR METAPHOR
Y awning I am at the sun that squints
O ut of your facade; not an
U ntimely reaction to your lethargic
R espect for everyone. A
M ere inhale which
E scapes with every idle word
T hat happens off your tongue
A deep exhale which
P ilfers through all the
H ints of your misguided self-importance. I am
O uting the sun of all your
R hetoric.
(c)Carolyn (The Bear Paw) Red Bear, 2013, all rights reserved.
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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
5/30/2013 |
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| I found this to be utterly brilliant! ~~ Diana |
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| Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks |
5/20/2013 |
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| Your spirit never pales and your writing ever grows. |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
5/20/2013 |
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Sure sounds like you're getting even.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
5/20/2013 |
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there is much stated here for the reader to think about
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
5/19/2013 |
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Life is filled with its ambiguities.
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/19/2013 |
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Impactful... ...and probably the right choice; thank you for sharing, Carolyn. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
5/19/2013 |
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| Ahh . . . This is a stunning piece of outing a deceiving and quite unreliable person. You chose your words carefully for maximum effect, and you chose well . . . |
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