It shines, by life phase, two
by A PAX
Sunday, February 24, 2013
Rated "G" by the Author.
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It shines, by life phase, two
The moon was tossed into the sky
From the wrist of mother earth
She found it floating on her sea
And thought it of no worth
It sailed right past the blazing sun
Who did not blink an eye
And then was yoked by gravity
Suspended on the high
And there it tipped and turned a bit
Alone and so confused
Until the sun, would seek her rest
Alone, it found it's clue
For what is tossed, may not be lost
By change it was renewed
Along with stars up in the skies
It shines, by life phase, two
Pax
A
2/24/13
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
2/25/2013 |
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| Pax, this is an original perspective and stimulating expression. It is good to read your fine work. I wish you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
2/25/2013 |
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Pax,
i love the point of view
and the unique delivery;
this is fine indeed
john |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
2/24/2013 |
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I love the way this flows and awakens thoughts. Very nicely done and shared. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
2/24/2013 |
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| Too freakin cool, hon, I like this alot...its upbeat and its got a beat...e |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
2/24/2013 |
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You have returned. Phase 2? It's amazing how much the moon means to life on earth. The moon's faint light at night and its gravitational pull causing the tides means that we are here and intelligent. That is the legacy of phase 2 of the moon.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Odin Roark |
2/24/2013 |
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| Delightful journey of Nature's infinite grace. Personifying such an object brings alive the many gifts it gives us. Thank you. |
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