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Victim
by serenety L

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Baby you made your choices
so many weeks ago
you never truly loved me
that for sure I know.


You surely never realized
how many nights I cried
how lost I felt without you
that deep inside I died.


The fact of wanting, knowing
the pain of loving you
I know you never saw it
but gave me hell to go through.


My love for you was unique
deep, honest, true and straight
I tried so hard to hold it
not noticing it was too late.


You turned and went away
without a word of good-bye
and left me like a little bird
with broken wings
no more able to fly


and I cry......


 


 



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Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 3/10/2004
I can relate this...such an emotional write!!!!
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 1/17/2004
Lovely Nico, this was absolutely lovely. but it made me feel kind of sad that it might be true. love and peace G
Reviewed by Mark Mahoney 1/3/2004
Emotional and extremely well written that flows along at gut wrenching speed,i love this...take good care...Mark
Reviewed by Birdie Houston 12/14/2003
This touched the heart and soul !
Reviewed by Vesna Blueflame 12/9/2003
..oh the pain of it all...ghastly..
Well written!

thankyou..

Vesna :)
Reviewed by Jim Dunlap 11/30/2003
Well, you seem to have many admirers. Nicely written on a painful subject.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 11/25/2003
O' I can relate to this one!!

Be strong okay!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 11/25/2003
This was so touching and just moved me deeply, beautifully written and expressed,

Reindeer
Reviewed by jude forese 11/25/2003
very sad, emotive poem...
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 11/24/2003
You express feelings here that go right to your reader's soul. Well done! Love, peace and strength, Regis.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 11/24/2003
Oh Nico, you sound like a wounded dove...beautiful sad poetry...well done!
Reviewed by Jack Roberts 11/24/2003
Such a sad poem Serenety. Very well done!!

Jack
Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader) 11/24/2003
Touching poem well written.
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 11/24/2003
Sad expressions of a love gone...
Written well.......
Love the picture.........
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 11/24/2003
(((serenety)))

powerful, beautiful, expressive, emotive poem--BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)
Reviewed by Christine Morell 11/24/2003
So sad and heartfelt Serenety...stay strong.
~Chrissie
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 11/24/2003
Guess some just never know how lucky they were, keep on keeping on, sad poem, but reading it was like watching a tennis game, as far as looking from on side to the other. Soon your cry with joy, go have fun fun fun
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 11/24/2003
Serenety, sad and heartbreaking. Being a victim is hard to break away from. Stay strong. Lisa
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 11/24/2003
(((NICOLETTE)))

Sooo good to see you here again; what a beautiful and heartfelt write! I loved the form and the overall presentation; this is very well done! Truly enjoyed this moving write; thanks for sharing!

((((HUGS))) and much love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :(

To ME, you are NOT a VICTIM; you are a SURVIVOR! :D

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