|Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
|I am applauding here.. not just for the poem but for the message within its lines... well done and well said.. Myrna|
|Reviewed by pat medlin
|writing the raw and naked truth about those things that need to be forgiven helps me whether read by others or not...i hear exactly what you're saying here jerry...p|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|I don't understand how one forgives self transgressions...I have tried, but still they haunt me...I am happy for you to be at peace with the self...e|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Sure glad you saw the light. I don't have any regrets, but I try to understand those that do. Your writing seems to help you a lot. Although I think you've written enough about it and need to get back to your diabolical plots and ploys that ooze from those swamps and creep into our consciousness through gifted writers like you.
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|I too learned to forgive someone I was but am not today. I learned many lessons when I was her so I guess the time was not wasted as I used to think it was. Thank you for this lovely reminder.
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|I love forgiveness, it's such an amazing thing we do for ourself
be it in forgiving ourself or forgiving someone else...
Tales from the darkside
& the raw egg yolk
|Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader)
|This makes me smile Jerry, I know both the guys.
I know about the misdemeanors and felonies.
The other guy wasn't a bad guy, he only did things of which you say afterward I should have done it differently.
I'm happy you did forgive him, because you did forgive yourself and took the burden of the past from your shoulders. You closed the dark door of the past and opened the light door of the future.
I like this poem very much Jerry