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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
3/24/2009 |
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| Beautiful! freedom of expression is yours Michele |
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| Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger |
8/23/2004 |
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| A stunning composition Michelle! The closing is fitting for the valiant effort you poured throughout the write, Poet. Sing it loud and sing it clear! |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
8/21/2004 |
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| Love frees! Love is all! So well said, Michelle. Love and peace to you. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Amira van Kerk |
8/20/2004 |
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One of the most precious things-freedom
Good one. |
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| Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) |
8/20/2004 |
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the wet in-between
your feet ---->nice.
great poem, but I think the last two stanzas may be a little over done.
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| Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang |
8/20/2004 |
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The Secret as to why we are on this Earth,
is LOVE, and you have got that figured out and expresssed
well in this poem! BRAVA!
I was diagnosed on August 12th with a Second Brain lesion. First one was in the brainstem and was taken out in 1997. I was left with a brain disease. And, brain damage. I need surgery but have opted out. Too many risks. Could you say a prayer? Thanks.
Becca |
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
8/19/2004 |
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| Love, the great liberator. Nicely done, Michelle. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
8/19/2004 |
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fingers tracing
the outline
of your soul
in the fogged-up
glass you worship
excellent image ... |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Richerson |
8/19/2004 |
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| Michelle, this was beautiful and stirring. Dawn |
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| Reviewed by P. Michaels |
8/19/2004 |
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Is it freedom from the cares of the world, while with God's love? Beautiful is the "Grace of the Skies". It makes a difference where we place our faith. Wonderful write.
Patty |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
8/19/2004 |
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Great write Michelle!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader) |
8/19/2004 |
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Hi Michelle,
this is a really nice feel, since, for some reason, I seemed to have felt along the same lines and just wrote one sort a the same, oh well, smile
this is a great line
fingers tracing
the outline
of your soul
in the fogged-up
glass you worship.
like the flow no pun intended Al |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
8/19/2004 |
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| Only place to get inner peace... |
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