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Hum
by Kate Burnside
Sunday, November 22, 2009
Rated "PG13" by the Author.

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A re-write of a very old poem, Transcendental, based on short prose by Virginia Woolf.



HUM


Dreamlike
on the blue-green
edge of reality;

weightless,
out of body,
into spirit –

a mere subsonic pulse,
a heartbeat.

Prescient, a palm
on my head
presses me down
deeper to
sublimation,

lungs inflated
from intimate,
unknown
mouth-to-mouth,

fullness blown
onto my lips,
idea a throb
in my throat.

Swollen, I float
mysterious,

first thoughts fluttering,
a quickening
of spawned progeny,
immaculate and inspired.

A bumble bee as yet
unmade for flight,
I rise awkward
yet somehow manage
to land with grace,

words my inadequate,
ephemeral wings
dissolving into light.



 



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Reviewed by La Belle Rouge 11/25/2009
Mystically beautiful, depth unveiled.
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 11/25/2009
I can hear the vibrations of your wonderful verses. You know how to take this reader to another level! somehow it has a wonderland type of feel into the abyss. Nicely done, my dear friend.

Have a wonderful day, and may the blessings from the Universe fulfill you in every way!

Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 11/25/2009
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu 11/24/2009
A mixed experience, with hybrid sensations... inflating, floating, fluttering... dissolving. A different perception adopted.

Axilea
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 11/24/2009
Makes me think of blowing soap bubbles when I was a kid. Very nice. Patrick
Reviewed by E T Waldron 11/23/2009
Kate, you truly know how to make things hum!You are an incredible wordsmith! Bless you!
Reviewed by Dale Clark 11/23/2009
A joy to read, Kate, so enlightened. Love it!
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 11/23/2009
Excellent poem, Kate. You really do a great job at creating a weightless feeling with your words, a kind of spiraling, floating sensation. It felt as though I was drifting into a dream or an alpha state of meditation. Love it!
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 11/23/2009
From the smoke of a burned our forest here comes falling an angel with ephemeral wings dissolving a flurry of rain drops like tears from the sky.

Georg

Reviewed by Sheila Roy 11/22/2009
Kate, for me, the first word sets the tone for this entire poem. It feels light and dreamy. Very imaginative. Love and Hugs,
Sheila
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 11/22/2009
Metamorphosis laden with a delicate grip transcending personal coherence copping a buzz-hum in a fever of flight, the verbal equivalent of the state of mind. The poet's imagination is bathed in journey in the inner and outer reality of existence....you've grown a stinger, Kate!

Love,
Sage
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 11/22/2009
Such a wonderful flow eluding to life's presumptuous flavor...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 11/22/2009
....such a fine line...to breathe in life is miraculous..great write Kate
Love,
Christine
Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg 11/22/2009
you do transcendental well :)....love that ending and relate to its power...
Reviewed by Felix Perry 11/22/2009
Such eloquent simplicity as you meld the words and esence of thought into the reality of life. Very nicely done Kate.
fee
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 11/22/2009
...and you're certain you never did acid, huh? This was a close trip then...;-) ed
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 11/22/2009
Lost in the wonder of your words, in you - this is ethereal, hypnotic in its beauty - well done, Kate.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by John Flanagan 11/22/2009
Kate,
Feathery and weighty in one, the images evoke awareness beyond the usual; love "idea a throb in my throat" followed immediately by, "Swollen, I float mysterious"...
Great work.

John
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 11/22/2009
I had strange thoughts when I first saw the title, but . . . This was an empirical delight, and by that I mean if we can write it, it is real and proven simply because the words has writ. Lovely cascade of thought no matter how short-lived your wings were at this particular time. Good.
Reviewed by George Carroll 11/22/2009
You take a flight into fantasy in this delightful head tickler.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 11/22/2009
A lovely and captivating write (experience shared), Kate. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 11/22/2009
Wonderful write, Kate; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours! :D
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