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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
11/25/2009 |
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| Mystically beautiful, depth unveiled. |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
11/25/2009 |
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I can hear the vibrations of your wonderful verses. You know how to take this reader to another level! somehow it has a wonderland type of feel into the abyss. Nicely done, my dear friend.
Have a wonderful day, and may the blessings from the Universe fulfill you in every way!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
11/25/2009 |
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| VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu |
11/24/2009 |
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A mixed experience, with hybrid sensations... inflating, floating, fluttering... dissolving. A different perception adopted.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
11/24/2009 |
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| Makes me think of blowing soap bubbles when I was a kid. Very nice. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
11/23/2009 |
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| Kate, you truly know how to make things hum!You are an incredible wordsmith! Bless you! |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
11/23/2009 |
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| A joy to read, Kate, so enlightened. Love it! |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
11/23/2009 |
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Excellent poem, Kate. You really do a great job at creating a weightless feeling with your words, a kind of spiraling, floating sensation. It felt as though I was drifting into a dream or an alpha state of meditation. Love it!
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
11/23/2009 |
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From the smoke of a burned our forest here comes falling an angel with ephemeral wings dissolving a flurry of rain drops like tears from the sky.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
11/22/2009 |
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Kate, for me, the first word sets the tone for this entire poem. It feels light and dreamy. Very imaginative. Love and Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
11/22/2009 |
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Metamorphosis laden with a delicate grip transcending personal coherence copping a buzz-hum in a fever of flight, the verbal equivalent of the state of mind. The poet's imagination is bathed in journey in the inner and outer reality of existence....you've grown a stinger, Kate!
Love,
Sage |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
11/22/2009 |
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Such a wonderful flow eluding to life's presumptuous flavor...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
11/22/2009 |
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....such a fine line...to breathe in life is miraculous..great write Kate
Love,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
11/22/2009 |
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| you do transcendental well :)....love that ending and relate to its power... |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
11/22/2009 |
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Such eloquent simplicity as you meld the words and esence of thought into the reality of life. Very nicely done Kate.
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
11/22/2009 |
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| ...and you're certain you never did acid, huh? This was a close trip then...;-) ed |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
11/22/2009 |
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Lost in the wonder of your words, in you - this is ethereal, hypnotic in its beauty - well done, Kate.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
11/22/2009 |
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Kate,
Feathery and weighty in one, the images evoke awareness beyond the usual; love "idea a throb in my throat" followed immediately by, "Swollen, I float mysterious"...
Great work.
John |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
11/22/2009 |
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| I had strange thoughts when I first saw the title, but . . . This was an empirical delight, and by that I mean if we can write it, it is real and proven simply because the words has writ. Lovely cascade of thought no matter how short-lived your wings were at this particular time. Good. |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
11/22/2009 |
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| You take a flight into fantasy in this delightful head tickler. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/22/2009 |
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A lovely and captivating write (experience shared), Kate. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
11/22/2009 |
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Wonderful write, Kate; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours! :D |
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