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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
12/20/2008 |
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A good poem you have written.take care
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by Wendy Cooper (Reader) |
6/7/2008 |
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I think I will xerox this off and give it to the bus drivers at the school where I teach. They consider it a good day if they get the kids to buckle up!
You captured the scene so well.
Nice job.
Wendy |
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| Reviewed by Julie Murphy |
5/22/2008 |
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| What a wonderful title! It hooks a reader to want to read further...about what all the fuss is about. Nicely done. Julie. |
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| Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz |
3/23/2008 |
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| There is usually a lot of fuss on the bus... I am sure a lot of bus drivers would appreciate this lesson being taught. Nice poem. |
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| Reviewed by George Thompson |
7/1/2007 |
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I'm with you, Diane. Do something, kids! Be quiet and leave the bus driver alone. Good write!
George |
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| Reviewed by alejapoet@aol.com Bennett |
5/16/2007 |
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| I WILL TELL MY 3 YEAR OLD THIS. |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
3/1/2007 |
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Hear- Hear... I am a School Bus driver, almost 10 yrs.
I got ya'back!
Wonderful felt and Wonderfully written!
I'd post this on the bus, but anything hung they call a disturbance...
I love your heart! - I started tracking you today- :)
Thank you!
WArmly, Lady Sheeeoox
Come to my corner of the den, when you can...
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| Reviewed by J.L. Day |
1/9/2007 |
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| Joyful and exuberant! |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
12/24/2006 |
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Cute write and every word the truth...I have two students inparticular that get in trouble at least twice a month for making a big fuss on the bus...might have to read this to them...or yet allow them to read it, I teach first grade and by this time of the year my students are quite fluent readers. Great write, enjoyed and will be back to visit again.
Blessings and Merry Christmas,
Joyce Bowling |
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| Reviewed by SaPAth AnANd |
9/15/2006 |
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Entertaining! well done Diane
Jaya Bholenath!
Roshan |
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| Reviewed by S Cardin |
7/20/2006 |
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Very cute - whimsical. An entertaining romp.
Steph |
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| Reviewed by Arthur Tugman |
6/29/2006 |
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Diane, I enjoyed your poem Fuss On The Bus.
Arthur |
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| Reviewed by Randall Barfield |
5/16/2006 |
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| Good read. Thanks for writing it. Cheers, Randy |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/20/2005 |
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| Delightful and bus drivers everywhere would appreciated this. Thank you, Diane. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Miller Caldwell |
12/3/2004 |
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Diane
This poem should be on every school bus and billboards in towns not to mention the class blackboard.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts
Miller |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
11/13/2004 |
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| Very cute. :-) |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
11/13/2004 |
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| Wonderful poetry for children... and adults. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
11/13/2004 |
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| cute! LOL |
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