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| Reviewed by Cynth'ya cynthyaspeaks@gmail.com |
4/16/2004 |
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. . . and the beat of life and its mystery goes on my brotha.
(didn't that feel good to get it all out? :-)
blessin's
cynth'ya lewis reed |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader) |
3/15/2004 |
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| I've done free form writing. My poem, "Go Ahead and Jump" is an example. I especially like to write poetry while listening to old songs--sometimes I take the first line or a phrase or whatever and see where it goes. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
5/3/2003 |
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| Know the feeling. Great style for release. |
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| Reviewed by richard poor |
3/13/2003 |
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| jus keep ramblin...it makes sense to me... |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
3/10/2003 |
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Though "never finish" strikes me as a better place to end, this to me is a poem. No sarcasm intended! Love the tension caused by clever juxtapositions in the first two verses. . .humor of "Wow that's Zen". . oomph of
"experimenting in a rhythmic, undulating
pump". . .surprise the "pump" engenders.
And the picture is perfect. Came here because I was so impressed with your article, and am very glad I did.
Phyllis |
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| Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen |
1/25/2003 |
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Wonderful meanderings, Brendan! :) The tenuous link between stanza's is understood when the last line is read, then nodded over with a slight smile.
Erin
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| Reviewed by Edward Petty (Reader) |
1/25/2003 |
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| The poem that's not actually a poem. I've never been good at free-form writing, but this is great. I'm tired, too, Brendan. I'm tired of not getting paid well enough to suit my high-income attitude. I want to buy almost everything I see. ;-} |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
1/8/2003 |
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| I am going to try this. I like it and it is refreshing from the standard form of writing. Floria |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
12/22/2002 |
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| To follow this, I did free form reading. Jumped all over page. Bill Murray |
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