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Cloud
by Jean Pike

Sunday, October 05, 2008
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An excerpt from my new novel, In The Shadow of the Dragonfly. This poem was my attempt to get into the head of a sixteen-year-old boy who has spent half his life in the foster care system...

Cloud

 
It's black. It's white. It shades the night,
the harvest moon, the satellite.
Obscures the sun and drinks the heat,
no Mother Earth beneath its feet.
And passing through
it rains on me, it rains on me,
it rains on you.
Till on the wind it rides again
to shades of where the shadows fall,
the white winds call (called out again)
Unfettered. Wild. I'm like a cloud,
nobody's fool. Nobody's child.
No wrong. No right. No splintered light
falls to the ground. Into the night,
the falcon's flight is
silent. Broken. Crashing down,
fallen angel hits the ground, I
hit the ground running.
But here I'm dancing out of step,
And here I'm singing out of tune, and
here I'm speaking out of turn, and here
I'm baying at the moon. Silent
Angel. Fallen. Wild.
Nobody's son.
Nobody's saint.
Nobody's child.
 
--Gray Baldwin
some dreams never die

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Reviewed by Debra Conklin 11/21/2009
I'm sure many children in these situations can relate to this poem. Have felt so many times that they didn't belong anywhere and when and if they were placed in a home, the threat that it would all just disappear in a moment, was uppermost in their minds.
Reviewed by Dawn Wilson 10/12/2009
Insightful, powerful and so very moving. I'm new to your work...I found you through Larry Hipppler's site (I see we're both fans) and am so glad that I did!
Reviewed by Lloyd Lofthouse 6/3/2009
In "Cloud" you have captured the wild child that has no center no home, no family.
Reviewed by Richard Orey 2/9/2009
Not to be loved, not to know you belong, not to be wanted is one of the most wicked evils of our world. It causes me deep sorrow to know that there are so many young persons that ache inside and out from the absence of love in their lives.

You have shared with us a powerfully moving insight. I believe we will all be better instruments of God by taking this message into our hearts.

Richard
Reviewed by Connie Faust 1/16/2009
You certainly have achieved your goal, judging by its effect on me. Very poignantly written, it stirs my heart with sadness for the children who are "nobody's child." Well done, Jean!
Connie
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 12/24/2008
Your compassionate and meaningful poem touches my soul, Jean. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 10/23/2008
Jean,

Aww, this is sad: pulls at the heart and gives it a squeeze. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Jerry Engler 10/21/2008
Great poetry, Jean--I think you really captured the mind of a boy, very beautifully and very spiritally,who has been through this kind of a system...very poignant, very questioning, very aware of the nature and movements of the world....Jerry
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price 10/8/2008
Great imagery and expression of te dark moods. Liz
Reviewed by Charlie 10/6/2008
Are you Gray Baldwin? This is an excellent write. I'll never forget the time I attended a youth workshop. The lecturer singled out one young man, and asked him "Who's your father?" I can't remember the point he was trying to make-- that everyone a strong relationship with the parents? Who knows. I just remember the silence that question caused, and the lecturer kept pushing, until finally someone said the young man didn't know. I learned later he'd been in various foster homes his whole life. It even today reminds me about the importance of family--whatever family we have--to not take it for granted, because there are those who never have known one. --Charlie
Reviewed by Regino Gonzales, Jr. 10/5/2008
I can feel, in this superbly written piece, random thoughts of a lad desperate to gather some Hope. As usual, it’s a damn good write Jean, my friend.

Sincerely,
Regino

Reviewed by L Hippler 10/5/2008
Perfect, Jean. I think you really captured the way a 16 year old would write.
Larry
Reviewed by Cleve Sylcox 10/5/2008
Excellent....I love the mystery of night. You words transcend the boundaries of imagination blending the characters inner self to the scene. I picture a very deep and troubled person harboring passions to dark to describe. I loved it.
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