THE YEARNING
by
Gary Kurz
Monday, July 02, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
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My first attempt to express myself in poetry. Reviewers be gentle.
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THE YEARNING
Time like sand shifts
life slowly, until,
in final repose, we ache
for what was not
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Cold Noses at the Pearly Gates
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| Reviewed by Preston Goodman |
2/14/2009 |
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| You said a lot in just <20 words. Excellent! |
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| Reviewed by John Domino |
9/9/2008 |
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I salute you for having God gifted talent!
From one retired office to another.
John Michael Domino, Maj, USAF Ret. |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
7/6/2008 |
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| Good first attempt. Hope to read many more. You can do it, we all did. We always do want what was not, but are given what we need. The Yearning says lots in such small amount of words. |
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| Reviewed by Theresa Koch |
1/29/2008 |
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| So true, well said~`* |
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| Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader) |
8/3/2007 |
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| Often there are regrets in the winter of life...time, sand, attitudes all change. Thought provoking and well written. Lydi** |
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