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| Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath |
5/11/2009 |
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Kathleen I quite enjoyed reading "Elusive Thread"
A touching write indeed.
All the best,
Gwendolyn
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| Reviewed by randy smith |
3/25/2009 |
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| Peace is indeed elusive. and mankind as a whole will never find it in the flesh! but it can be had in the sprit.nice write. randy c smith |
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| Reviewed by Lloyd Lofthouse |
12/7/2008 |
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| Yes, we have to always strive for peace and hope that one day we will begin again for the last time. I see the images of the starting over again and again in "begun in the dark-bound ice of midwinters turning", and "the tatters of broken darkness. When the sparking flame ... returns." I see these lines offering hope that maybe peace will arrive if "we" do not give up striving for it. |
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| Reviewed by Ken Chartrand |
5/16/2008 |
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| Hi Kathleen, I read your poem, "Elusive Thread". I found it mysterious and thought provoking. Yes Peace must be something we must strive to achieve so as it contains a win win situation for all parties. Great work. Please feel free to visit my site here in the "Den". |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
4/17/2008 |
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Kathleen, I underscore all that has been said by your other admirers.
Beautifully said, highly professional. Gene. |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Mullan |
11/13/2006 |
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| Wonderfully written piece, the metaphor is brilliant. Thank you, DL Mullan |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
5/29/2006 |
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| A deep touching poem..........M |
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| Reviewed by Charles O'Connor III |
2/16/2006 |
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Your poem was very thought grabbing to me. I sensed a creepily delicious flow in your poem and as a writer in a style of lovecraft, I enjoyed this very much. Good wording, good work.
Charles |
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| Reviewed by Masood Lohar |
12/30/2005 |
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"...ideals that quickly rust in rain
like shattered swords."....
Huh.. what a metaphor! Peace has woven our civilizations. If peace is dead, civilization is just a shroud.
A great work Kath
Masood Lohar |
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| Reviewed by Manes Pierre |
11/7/2005 |
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Elusive Thread is truly captivating. Peace is indeed an elusive thread. Keep writing!
Manes Pierre |
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| Reviewed by George Jackson |
10/15/2004 |
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Peace really is an elusive thread. Once I find my end of it, i'll let ya know. Beautifull writing here. Thank you,
Sylkie |
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| Reviewed by Chuckie Finn |
8/25/2004 |
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Fascinating effort Kathleeen. My sincere compliments.
Chuckie |
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| Reviewed by Eddie Thompson |
3/15/2004 |
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| very nicely done!...wonderful imagery and capturing depth. |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
2/4/2004 |
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| Excellent write....BHUWAN!!!! |
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| Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry, R.C. |
11/5/2003 |
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"Elusive thread called peace." Excellent, well written, very much to the point that love, happiness and peace are found within us: never without. Visit me sometime, Kathleen.
Love in Christ~~
Bonnie Q
Unicorn Haven |
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| Reviewed by Marco Landi |
10/23/2003 |
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| I enjoy reading this elusive Thread |
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| Reviewed by Jim Dunlap |
10/7/2003 |
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Have you had this published? It seems to be fantasy poetry. I suspect I know somewho who would like to publish it. He also takes
reprints. |
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| Reviewed by Vesna TwinFlameunion |
9/19/2003 |
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..this is exquisite in its wondrous beauty..I sure am looking forward to your next piece..ty
Vesna
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| Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme |
7/12/2003 |
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| I've added this one to my library...great write, kindred Celtic soul! |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) |
6/23/2003 |
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WELCOME TO THE DEN!
What a wonderful well penned piece, am looking forward to reading more!
~Nikki~ |
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| Reviewed by E. Lucas-Taylor |
6/22/2003 |
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| Wonderful work. |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
6/22/2003 |
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| Wonderfully written, colorful and descriptive..I enjoyed it's fullness. ~SH~ |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
6/22/2003 |
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| Very good. The answer is doing away with the need for war. |
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