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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
11/24/2009 |
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| We are losing our natural resources at an alarming rate but the one thing I fear we are losing is our freedom in this political climate we are in. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
11/23/2009 |
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| Indeed we must, Amber, but we see not with the eyes of the heart that floods the mind with emotion - but instead with the eyes of the mind that overrides the compassionate, pro-active energies of the heart. The mind is often cold and obsessively preoccupied with its own private "business". It will take a melding of engaged and melted hearts to stem the flow and dam the flood. Otherwise, when it is too late, we will have all the time in the world to not only see but experience "what we are seeing"! Water rules the world and yet we continue to make our obstinate minds our personal paradise islands while all else drowns. However, it is the heart that can flourish and blossom with all good things when sorrounded by chaos, so perhaps that's what it takes to "wake us up!". It's already happening here. Clarion writing, thank you xx |
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| Reviewed by Emile Tubiana |
11/22/2009 |
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| Dear Amber, your poem raises very important questions. You are not the only one who brought up those questions. After thousands of years, these questions are still alive. The time of the awakening is still far for most of the people. Those who see those questions are few and no one pays attention, because their time has not arrived. The task of those who see is very big, but the time will come. We need to have patience, compassion, and perseverance. First and foremost, we should keep our faith intact. These are the powers that will help advance these causes. Where there are two or three assembled in my Name, I am among them Love Emile |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
11/21/2009 |
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Powerful message in this beautiful verse
I truly agree with your words
Many of us have the power to
See far beyond
You are correct we must learn to see
What we are really seeing
Wishing you Peace Love and Light..and
A happy TOM TOM DAY LOL
A Happy Thanksgiving Day Miss You too my friend..Yolie |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
11/21/2009 |
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| POWERFUL WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
11/21/2009 |
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Lobsang Rampa told us about The Third Eye which now appears to be closed in many, as the physical eyes also have been long ago avoiding to see what they should.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
11/20/2009 |
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Sometimes I think greed plays a big part in our destruction. Amber, this message is strong and you expressed it passionately. Well done!
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
11/20/2009 |
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| We need to look, see and action! |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
11/20/2009 |
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Tangerine of the citrus eye of the navel, the center of the attention span where our neurotransmitters respond to light beaming us up to a higher form of intelligence, Amber...the Earth will replenish itself and greed will be buried under layers and layers of shell and soil, burying with it, those with evil intentions and those who have left scars upon Gaia's surface, the polluters and the poachers...your vision reminds us of this day coming when all of Mother Earth replenishes itself and its goodly people...all others will perish...be well...
Love,
Sage |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
11/20/2009 |
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mankind's eyes are still evolving ... unfortunately, they are blinded by misguided visions ... one day the eyes of the human soul will crystallize, unless we tear them from our being before they have a chance to "see what we are seeing" ...
an important inspirational poem, Amber ... |
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| Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley |
11/20/2009 |
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I watched a wonderful documentary
about the Maya calendar prophecies (2012)
Their demise maybe came from their water source
becoming poisoned from their sacrificial human
blood flowing into the water where they decided
to sacrifice members in the ritual offered
to the Gods of (?) & we also contaminate our
own life sources.
Take comforts in the goodness of your spirit & you're not alone!
Peace, Love & Inspirations
Vickie
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/20/2009 |
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What does it take to wake us up?
There are signs all over the Universe.
We as human beings should be able to see
with "new eyes" that dwell within our soul.
"We must learn to see what we are seeing"!
Like the voice of a prophet, Amber; you are so very right. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
11/20/2009 |
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alas, amber, we humans wired to be willfully blind, it seems.
but, nature will take its course, as it has done in the eons gone by. i am not at all hopefully for the survival of our species.
engaging write.
cg |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
11/20/2009 |
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Amber,
A powerful, direct cry for help...yes. we're destoying at a phenomenal rate and we hold several conferences a year about it, Copenhagen's coming up in December, and what will be achieved? very little...greed wins.
Thank you for this.
John |
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| Reviewed by Ed J. |
11/20/2009 |
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We see but with different views. Money does not solve problems people do. Wonderful write hun
Stay well and keep writing
Ed |
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| Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu |
11/20/2009 |
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I think that more and more people are learning to see... but those who see are afraid of the unknown and somehow isolated. Meanwhile, those who manipulate our fears grow powerful. That's the way I see it. :)
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
11/20/2009 |
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Amber, your compassion moves me--and I'm certain many others--
to see and react to what we are seeing. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by John Bidwell |
11/20/2009 |
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How this can ever get better remains to be seen.
Very good wake up call.
John |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser |
11/20/2009 |
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| It makes you wonder. I think it's human nature to bury our collective heads in the sand until things really get desperate. I believe there is a mass awakening taking place, at the same time that the power elite are trying to keep us dumbed down and confused. More will be revealed. Nice poem. |
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| Reviewed by Roger Ochs |
11/20/2009 |
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| The "litany" style works so very well here. I especially liked your change in the last line. It serves well as the "Amen" of the litany. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
11/20/2009 |
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Too many people don't want to see or know what's going on in front of them, and that's a durn shame indeed! Powerful message in this, Amber; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
11/20/2009 |
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A lot of wisdom in this write Amber, all too often people cannot see past their own front door...
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