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Final Bubble's burst
by Marissa M Couchon
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Going through the things we shared

Reading cards and the things you wrote

After all the thing were said I can’t help but wonder

Were they all lies, did you ever really care?

You don’t know what you’ve done to me

You’ve left me floundering again

You broke my heart a final time

I won’t let you do it again

I stood by you through many things

Supported you when you needed it most

Even saved your life a time or two

I’d do it again should the need arise

You used to make me laugh even if I was mad

Now you act like “So now you’re mad.” I’m glad

You sing as if nothing is wrong when our lives are falling part.

Is there really nothing left in your heart

 That you are glad we are done?

What happened to two as One?

 Is it really all gone? Are we really done?

Your answers will decide if this is permanent or not

I thought I’d live out my days with you

Now I see that may not be

A bit of me has died inside

My final bubble burst

 



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Reviewed by JMS Bell
ITS BEEN A WHILE SINCE THIS WAS INITIALLY POSTED AND NOW...I HOPE THINGS WITH YOU ARE BETTER. YOU EXPRESS WELL YOUR FEELINGS OF WANTING TO MAKE A FINAL DECISION...GO OR NO. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Truly a very personal piece written especially for a single reader. I hope it is cathartic for you.

Ron
Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
This poem tells a really sad story. I wish I could be there to hold you and tell you it will be all right, but my experience tells me that right now that's a hollow promise.

I guess whatever doesn't kill us makes us stronger.

Chip Bergeron
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Nice poetic query, Marissa...

Sage
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