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strands of electric
by Debby J Rosenberg
Sunday, November 22, 2009
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true experience


 

 

 

like a mad professor with Einstein hair

he came running across a grassy field

with a grand hugging gesture

we smiled like long lost friends

 

over the years he has been a teacher

often in lecture halls and small classrooms

like flashes of insight my memory processes

our epic encounters that have lasted throughout

my lifetime

 

of course, he only exists in my dreamland

what he teaches is not of logic nor typical

of my earthbound education experienced

 

excited to know my progress

he squeals with childlike excitement

“can you see it’, “can you see the colors”?

he asks, as if there’s a clue what he is confirming

 

“there, there” in your hands and quickly

positions my hands palms upward and

spread apart, and in that instant clear as light

was the most fantastic spectacle of neon blue

 

arcing between both my palms like current

were 5 strands above and 5 strands below

easily played into wave forms as wrists flexed

and pulsed this colored energy back and forth

 

a grin crossed my lips delighted in this

newly discovered presence and quickly noticed

the entire scene evaporating before

the chance to further inquire this lesson

 

and you know…all day,  been trying to

recreate seeing that energy….

 




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Reviewed by Regis Auffray 11/22/2009
Thank you for sharing this fascinating (and thought-inciting) experience, Debby. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser 11/22/2009
Somehow I keep picturing the crazy professor from Back to the Future in all this. Interesting poem and insight into bridging the gap between the dream and waking world.
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 11/22/2009
Wow Debby what a neat picture! What a fantastic write, and sounds like one fantastic experience too...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 11/22/2009
You have, in Strands of Electric verse, Debby - this is beautiful. I sense a childlike wonder in these lines - well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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