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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
1/1/2007 |
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Yes Blackberry, this is very wonderfully expressed, from deep in your heart and soul. Happy New Year Blackberry Jam, to you, and those whom you love.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be." |
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| Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson |
11/7/2006 |
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| A wonderfully expressive poem, Blackberry! Welcome back! |
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| Reviewed by AFree Verse |
11/6/2006 |
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| So excellent because it's so true. Who can't relate to these words?! |
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| Reviewed by Damaa -- |
11/5/2006 |
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| Thank you for your comments. I have been away too long. I appreciate your kind words. Hope to post more soon. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
11/5/2006 |
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Blackberry. first of all it is so great to see you back on board again, you have been missed. As for this poem it is very self reflective and I hope it is not a personnal statement for it rings with self doubt which is somthing you should certainly not have. Great job though of a sad subject.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by ~ Chanti |
11/5/2006 |
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An achingly sad write. The feeling of not being enough is something that is often a reflection of our own insecurity. You have no reason to be insecure. It is obvious you're a talented, sensitive and insightful person. May you find that you are more than enough.
Chanti |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
11/5/2006 |
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Wow! This is a beautiful and deep write...if there is someone who has left your life...they are missing out on a fantastic poet, their loss. Nice write my friend don't be so hard on yourself, often times it is the one who departs where the problem lies.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling |
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| Reviewed by Aberjhani |
11/5/2006 |
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A deep deep look inside the dynamics of emotional exchange within relationships. IN THE ABSENCE OF YOU makes me wonder if we sometimes both offer and expect "too much" in our unions with others. A great thought-provoking read.
Aberjhani |
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