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  Pretend Cloud
by Z B McClure
Sunday, August 23, 2015
Rated "G" by the Author.

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Pretend  C L O U D

 by  Z. B. McClure                    


I  saw a  cloud  the shape of moon,
among the clouds it  hid.
I  was,  at  first, decieved until
that cloud, the  others  shed.

Then standing by,  this cloud exposed,
so  perfect round, and white
was seen for what it truly  is:
such a breathtaking  sight.

Against the pale, calm blue sky,
it stayed ,  afixed by glue.
Sometimes, I think I am that moon;
Sometimes, I truly, do.


Copyright 2015 Zach B McClure  All Rights Reserved


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Reviewed by m j hollingshead 8/27/2015

enjoyed the read, look forward to reading more of your work

keep writing


Reviewed by Clarence Prince 8/25/2015
Yes, truly the moon is a breathing sight,
Affixed by glue, created by God,
it is serving its purpose!
Thanks for sharing,
this piece of work, Z B McClure!
Reviewed by Barbara Henry 8/24/2015
Great write ZB; I am not trying to deceive you with this comment.
Continued success.
Barbara J. Henry
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 8/24/2015
Your comment deceived me into forgetting what I read in the poem.

Rereading… Yes, seeing the moon in the daytime is always a wonderful sight.

Reviewed by Z McClure 8/23/2015
there is one mis-spelled word purposely inserted into my poem- guess which one?
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