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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
11/22/2009 |
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Vista Magic
Oh contrare'
Vista's B. Gates
Worst nightmare
Sadly you too
Have awakened in his bed
Only to find that
Your computer's really dead.
Fun write. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu |
11/21/2009 |
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Phyllis, I agree with Roger on this one. Very funny!
What will happen next?
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
11/21/2009 |
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| computer dysfunction is a communicable disease and I know of no one that has not suffered the consequences of its bite! -- thanks for the humor Phyliss Jean -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Roger Ochs |
11/20/2009 |
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| A wonderful sense of humor. This reads like a 21st century Marx Brothers scene. |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
11/18/2009 |
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Great feeling of frustration in this poem. It's playful, too. Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
11/17/2009 |
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Know this feeling too well. Great humor although your anxiety in being without....shows.
Blessings!
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/17/2009 |
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It is indeed amazing how we have come to rely on the computer. I was without my internet connection for a few days and it took some real "adjustments." Thank you, Pea. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
11/17/2009 |
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30 years ago, I didn't own a computer and now it seems I can't live without one.
Love & Light,
Joseph |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
11/17/2009 |
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| lol ya gotta love it. Good one, Pea. |
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| Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley |
11/16/2009 |
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Hold On!!! OHHhhh SHITzoooooo A PC CRASH!
You should be back on yur'bigger gigs soon!
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
11/16/2009 |
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| wishing it back safe and sound |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
11/16/2009 |
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| Oh Pea this is a stitch....:) |
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| Reviewed by Marcia Duning (Reader) |
11/16/2009 |
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| I feel you pain, Pod. This too should pass or not! |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
11/16/2009 |
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Have to smile about this one, going through the same crisis with mine...yuk
Feel better soon, Pea.
Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
11/16/2009 |
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Ahhh ... poor baby,
Kinda like losing the windshield
on your spaceship. And dental torture too?
I know what it's like, they're fickle as my first wife.
Peace sweet pea
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
11/16/2009 |
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Pea, I don't know what I would do without my computer, I wouldn't be able to read poetry that makes me laugh like this one. You are too much! Very cute poem. Thanks for sharing, we all can relate.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
11/16/2009 |
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| cute write-i hope you are feeling better |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
11/16/2009 |
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I love it and for the millions of us out there you spoke quite well to describe how we all feel when for whatever reasons we lose our friend...PC.
hugs
fee |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
11/16/2009 |
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| What a wonderful world we live in. Is there life after computer? Stay tuned for the end of civilized world as we know it, when the "Humals" try to claw their way back from almost destruction. "Humal:" Part animal, part human, characters in the next novel I will be writing after I finish the hard-boiled detective one. Sorry for the ad, just got carried away . . . |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
11/16/2009 |
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Technology: you learn to love it or hate it. Right now, I'm not so sure. Our computer picked up a virus somewhere, shuts down in the middle of whatever I'm doing, and I'm ready to throw the *expletive deleted* clear across Texas!!!! Agree with Paul D. Berube, (((Pea))) - think we're addicted. Having no job, being disabled, have no life. :( I feel your frustrations - very well penned.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Paul D Berube |
11/16/2009 |
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| Withdrawal is no fun, Phyllis. ;-) |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
11/16/2009 |
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Geez,you really got me laughing and can I relate or what???? Learned my lesson, now I have three so when one breaks down I can still remain connected. Get feeling better....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
11/15/2009 |
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...and next week, the Cable Guy... it never stops.
Nice one, Pea!
John |
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