|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Not only 'eavesdropping on our own reverie' but luxuriating in every glorious aspect of creating it. Intense and wholly impassioned writing. Sweat drips exotically from every 'pen' stroke, Amor. xx|
|Reviewed by Tiana ~
|Beautiful passionate poem, Amor! Beautifully penned! I loved it :)|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|Reviewed by J. Roseline
|Beautiful expressions Amor... May your love expressions sparkle ever..JK|
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|Wow, intense images, well done!|
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|Sensually penned enhancing the beauty and the wildness of two people beginning the dance of love to the conclusion.......to tremors. Bravo!
|Reviewed by Diana Wiles
|Amor, I love your wild, passionate writing..
...your beautiful style is always inimitable...
|Reviewed by Isabella Koldras
|...a true poet...word connoisseur at poetic play...taken upon the sheets
in passionate love.."As two bodies merge"...offering themselves to readers
voyeuristic gaze...some co-heading toward the climax...leaving the tiny few
philosophical minds...in a quiet contemplating..."Homo sum, humani nihil
a me allenum puto"....
Thank you Amor for sharing your artistry in words.
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|No one can write the experience better than you. However, I did find the idea of "slithering" a bit put offing realizing that it would be probably forgotten in the heat of the moment.
Tiana can be honored to know that she inspires so much.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|"Wrapped around the staff of life." Absolutely and you'd better believe it. You started the poem of passionate love making exactly where it should have started and from then on you were poetical to the nth in your sensations and your glowing tribute to sexual love making.|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Beautiful love poem|