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Ecstasy Upon the edge
by Amor Sabor

Saturday, May 11, 2013
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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what is it that we have wasted
if not time we could have spent together?
living on the edge of our dreams
on the precipices of waking thought

we just happened on different planes
in the geometry of our awkward lives
taking the transit of broken promises
to a sea that yet overlaps the needing

the heart falters over the impossible
as it follows it’s haphazard course
slipping away in a hazy distance
awaiting a voyage of frustrations agony

we live no longer in the reality of life
but in the soft fringes of imagination
ghosts in the light of a blown candle
amid the shadows of yesterdays calm

what makes the world go around
when we have fallen in tangential lines?
away from reason and sensibility
into an endless sky of forbidden wants

we existed for the moment of knowledge
truly given birth in loves upper hand
but only to die upon its battered shores
to be fractured when once we were whole

to know love and yet taste its lacking
through the saltiness of bittersweet tears
understanding the futility of duty
and complying with belonging to life

we yearn in the moment we close our eyes
and resurface in the waves of destiny
stung by the realization of waking alone
even when we found ecstasy upon the edge

© Amor Sabor 2013
   


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Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 5/13/2013
Amor this is such a thing of bittersweet beauty. Deeply emotive and deeply heartfelt. One of the most beautiful and affecting poems I've ever read.
Reviewed by Teresa Walker 5/12/2013
Lament is what comes to my mind Amor. Beautiful, sad, an awakening, and yet, ecstasy upon the edge. Our lives are all about the climax of all things, bonding, sports, writing, life challenges, food, nature, religion..etc..etc. This one made me think about many things. I have found in my aloneness I have done great things pushed to that edge!

All consuming my friend!
Teresa
Reviewed by Lark Pogue 5/12/2013
This is beautiful and sad. Your writing is superb.
L
Reviewed by Isabella Koldras 5/11/2013
Powerful expression of the deep spiritual longing,
emotional hollow void and an inexplicable emptiness
that...lost love creates.
Great poem, Amor. Felt in chest...heart.
With warm regards Isabella.
Reviewed by Vivian Dawson 5/11/2013
Softly smelling the love..
bittersweet when gone, but
worthy in all journeys taken

Lady Vivian
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 5/11/2013
Beautiful, sad and VERY TALENTED!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Odin Roark 5/11/2013
The oft quoted argument, "anticipation is greater than reality" is put to the test here in what for me is a truly heartfelt and painful mirroring of something that was and that which still might be. Beautifully uttered, void of simplistic lost love rhetoric.
Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci 5/11/2013
So many have known having love and then finding out how it feels when it's gone. It hurts. As you say, "to be fractured when once we were whole".

Love ya!

Jane
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 5/11/2013
Much here to savor, much to be saddened by. Tasting love and its sublime feelings only to have it whisked away, to leave us empty and wanting is a sad occurrence that most of us can relate to . . .
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