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Our Pacific Journey Pt 1
by Amor Sabor

Monday, March 02, 2015
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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“Our Pacific Journey” Part I (Book of Love) 1 of 3

I can feel the inertia of your footsteps
the urgency of your heels as you walk
side by side we are two shadows in the halls
dark and lit only by the whim of the moon
I feel such intense pride in walking with you
as I fumble for the room key in my hands
as we carry our luggage and shopping bags

the breeze stretches the length of our stride
bringing a staccato to the click of your heels
you, a figure of class and elegance in the night
I, full of nervousness and impatience paired
your high heels echo in that dark hallway
and your dress is etched upon a fine figure
clinging to you as if clinging to eternal life

we approach the room with palms swaying
in the open gaps of the second floor wing
and an anxiety coursing through our veins
we stop to look and smile at one another
as I nervously put the key into the lock
it goes in with a ratchet and the door opens
unfolding a scene of romance before us

rose petals are scattered upon the large bed
and chocolates are unopened on a bureau
we place our luggage to briefly embrace
and we kiss just before we scan the room
we put things away and take out essentials
we take time to undress and leisurely shower
before we both shyly slip under the covers

we are in paradise and there is no hurry
because the night for us is still very young
we kiss and embrace for nearly an hour
with Brazilian jazz playing in the background
and scented candles lit all around the room
providing all the light we will ever need
with my cologne and your perfume wafting

I could never have imagined heaven to be as so
with arms around each other in our deep embrace
feeling the satin of our bare skin in the dim light
while escaping into the twilight of our own Eden
and with the sweet taste of love floating in the air
your long hair partially covering me like the sails
of a sleek boat racing half way across the moon

© 2015 Amor Sabor
 

Amor and Tiana
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Reviewed by CHANTI LACE 3/21/2015
beautiful writing sweet man...Hugssss
Reviewed by JMS Bell 3/8/2015
AAHHHH...AMOR. YOUR NAME COMPLIMENTS YOUR UNION TO A 'T'. WAS IT GOD PEERING DOWN THE HALLS OF YOUR FUTURE?...KNOWING THAT ONE DAY YOU WOULD COME TO KNOW AND UNDERSTAND ITS MEANING...SO COMPLETELY. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 3/7/2015
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Tiana ~ 3/6/2015
Making beautiful memories together and you've captured it so beautifully, mi amor ... Te Amo ...
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 3/5/2015
It's so wonderful when the whole night is just for two in love. Beautiful poem Amor.
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 3/4/2015
Amor,
You certainly have not lost your touch! What a romantic setting for some hot romance!
Nicely done as always,
Peace love and light
Amber
Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather 3/3/2015
Eden sounds delightful! ( here, not so delightful, about to rain/sleet )
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 3/3/2015
Delicately describing one dream of a honeymoon that so many don't get to cherish. At least they can get the feel by reading your poem.

Ron
Reviewed by George Carroll 3/3/2015
Great poetry
Reviewed by Diana Wiles 3/3/2015
Oh what Heaven you describe Amor...! The sensual anticipation is perfectly and enchantingly described.....
..I love: "like the sails of a sleek boat racing half way across the moon..." A real touch of genius...
Diana....
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger 3/2/2015
~Amor~
Lovely Pacific paradise!

Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 3/2/2015
A well written send off for the Pacific Journey.
Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci 3/2/2015
Ahhhh!!!!! This takes me to a memory.......a heavenly memory! Thank you.

Love ya!

Jane
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 3/2/2015
Heavenly loveliness! A beautiful gift well-shared through your verses, Amor. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis



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