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Displaced
by Annabel Sheila

Tuesday, May 21, 2013
Rated "G" by the Author.
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This is my poem that received a commendation in the 2013 Rockingham, Australia's Castaway Poetry Competition...I wrote about a picture of a dilapidated lighthouse...this is what I saw...

 

 
I used to wander along the shore, gathering seashells…
whimsical treasures left behind by the ebbing tide.
And if I was lucky I’d chance upon mermaid’s tears
poking out of the sand like sparkling gems!
I’d stuff my pockets with Neptune’s gifts
and climb the ancient cement steps of the lighthouse
thinking its comforting beacon must surely be
very near heaven’s doorstep…
The old wrought iron railing, worn but sturdy
felt as though it would crumble beneath my fingertips
as I climbed higher and higher, seagulls teasing me
with their unmistakable chatter!
And when I’d finally reach the top
I’d gaze out over the deep sapphire sea
Where sunlight glittered as though a million candles
had been set upon its gently rippling surface
by King Neptune himself!
And I never wanted to leave…
But children must journey into the realities of life
leaving the magic of innocence behind.
And just like the lighthouse that once stood proudly on the shore
they find themselves displaced in a tumultuous sea
searching for a safe haven in the storm.
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Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks 5/21/2013
A insightful and wonderful way to express the condition many of our children find in the world.
Reviewed by Mark Lichterman 5/21/2013
What a lovely, heartfelt poem, Anna, my friend, that certainly does deserve, at the very least, an commendation. This brings to mind a recently read, wonderful novel (kindle) about a lighthouse and it's keeper and his wife, and an infant that washed ashore, that I would very highly recommend you read: "The Light Between Oceans".
Mark
Reviewed by Budd Nelson 5/21/2013
it should have received more than that it is wonderful
budd
Reviewed by E. Phillips 5/21/2013
A moment of wonder as seen by a child and treasured by all who dare to return there from time to time. Beautifully written and well received. Ed
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 5/21/2013
Very well put, Anna, and so like life itself. I can just picture you as a wee little girl climbing those "worn but sturdy" iron railings. It is a gem of a snapshot in my thoughts.
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