repost...I don't want to go there
by Kay P M- Devenish
Friday, March 15, 2013
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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I don’t want to go there,
I don’t want to look,
I'm too comfortable within
this warm and cozy nook.
The radio is playing
a real old melody,
and there are scones and tea and cake,
on my table. …just for me.
So… I don’t want to go there,
I don’t want to look,
I’ll just read some perfect poems,
from my website …or a book.
And later on, I’ll just lie down,
in my crisp and clean white sheets,
and snuggle up to take a nap...
‘cause mid afternoon… I’m beat.
( I don’t want to go there,
I don't want the stress,
I don’t want to see that place ,
where everything’s a mess).
My life is free of troubles,
the cupboards full of ‘goodies’,
my bath tubs full of bubbles,
so I’m doing what I please.
And...
I don’t want to go there,
or even contemplate,
looking at that ugly sight,
and watching things I’m sure to hate.
The winter sun is shining
and the daffodils look gold,
the hyacinths are shooting up
and the mornings now are cold.
So... I don’t want to wonder
about those yonder lands at war,
and I don’t want to think about
ANYTHING outside MY door.
I don’t want to look and see
starving children watching me,
I don’t want my T.V. set
showing sights I won’t forget.
( I don’t even want them in my dreams,
I don’t want to ever hear their screams ).
No… I don’t want to go there,
not even for a glance,
for if I had to see those sights,
I might just HAVE to take a stance.
And ...
I don’t want to go there…
in that horid ugly zone,
where little boys pick coco beans
(like slaves), each day from dawn.
And little girls are given
to old men to be their brides,
and babies have no milk to drink ,
and are covered, sick… with flies.
No!!!
I don’t want to go there,
for I know I might feel bad,
about this lovely life I live,
(the type of life they wished they had).
So….
I’ll push away all thought of them,
and I won’t watch the news,
and I’ll turn around when ugly’s near,
so I won't have to see,
because ,...MY life is perfect,
and those sights... just bother ME.
I don't want to go there...
where women have no rights,
and they get stoned to death
if they rebel about their plights.
I don't want to go there...
where land mines pave the way,
and dirty water is a fact of every single day.
I Don't want to get upset,
and so I turn my head,
no body can blame me
it's not my business...and as I said;
I don't want to go there,
it isn't my affair,
if they bomb each other...what can I do?
I live here...not there.
The evening here is blissful,
the wattle flowers now bloom,
and I don’t want to go there,
to that other world,
of death ...and gloom.
Night time here's so peaceful,
and the Southern Cross shines bright,
and I'm in my bed all-comfy,
and I'm feeling ALL is right...
and it's almost time to go to sleep
( just have to say my prayers ),
but I sort of hear a whisper...
of a conscience from upstairs,
and I'm feeling mighty guilty
'cause I know 'HE'S' seen my day,
and I can almost hear 'HIS' words,
as I begin to pray ,
I suddenly TOUCH heaven
but it's pointing me the other way,
and I know.... if I don't change real soon,
one day I 'll HAVE to say;
'I don't want to go there,
please God ...let me in',
but He'll send me the OTHER place ,
( the one that's just for sin),
and ...
I DON'T WANT TO GO THERE...
but as sure as stars above,
if I don't change that's where I'll be,
for all this....I'm guilty...OF!
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
4/14/2013 |
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~Kay~
The daffodils of gold and the hyacinths scents fill the air
this April morning. Marvelous write so clear and precise.
A warm heart to thoughts.
Lady Mary Ann |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
3/27/2013 |
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| WOW...THIS IS ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC! IM SAVING IT IN MY LIBRARY! IT IS TERRIBLY TERRIFIC!!!! AND THAT IS ALL I HAVE TO SAY! OH...AND, IM MAKING A COPY OF IT AND HANGING IT ON MY COVETED WALL IN BACK OF MY CHAIR WHERE I SIT AT MY COMPUTER. THIS IS A POETICAL HOME RUN, MY FRIEND...WITH ALL THE BASES LOADED! THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
3/25/2013 |
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most interesting reading
love & peace be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by Dark Knight |
3/20/2013 |
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| I think we all turn the channels with our remotes or don't want to hear what we know is true--thought provoking--I like the way you write |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
3/19/2013 |
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| Good beyond description!! **********K U D O S ********** |
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| Reviewed by Edward Phillips |
3/16/2013 |
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Wow! This is as powerful as it gets.
You've made the case for getting involved
so perfectly. We are all in this thing
called life together. Get out of your comfort
zone and help patch up the cracks. |
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| Reviewed by John Domino |
3/15/2013 |
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Absolutely right on target!
Our word IS what we make it.
Why should all the worlds blunders invade us whenever we turn on the TV?
Much better chance of success when tending to your OWN garden'
But getting rid of all them weeds is tough too...Oh well...
God bless you!
John Michael Domino |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
3/15/2013 |
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I don't remember this one, but I should. Perhaps that's why I remember your poetry touched me in the past. This poem is a tour de force about the hypocrisy of the wealthy in this world who look down upon the very world they created by raping and pillaging and calling it making use of natural resources. Humans are humans and they are not resources to be consumed. As soon as we learn that, the world would be a much better place. Thanks for sharing this with us once again.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
3/15/2013 |
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| What everybody else said, especially Jerry...e |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
3/15/2013 |
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i am keeping this one to read many times more
budd |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
3/15/2013 |
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Holy crap! This is stunning poetry and a definite keeper...You truly have penned a masterpiece!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
3/15/2013 |
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I agree with Jerry....
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
3/15/2013 |
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| Kay, you have written a masterpiece! Words fail me. I'm stunned and shaking my head. Wonderful, wonderful touching and in-depth poetry |
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