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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
6/12/2013 |
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A rose waiting for the sun
to dry the dew *Deborah*
Perhaps..
Lady Vivian
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
6/12/2013 |
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| VERY SAD BUT BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
6/11/2013 |
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I see it to be dialogue in a daytime soap...it's a compliment to The Bold and the Beautiful, Deb...the female soap star I can hear saying these lines...sometimes to sell poetry, we have to put it in other formats and package it in a different light...poet today, soap writer tomorrow...
Drama & Love's Memory
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
6/11/2013 |
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I know I am loved :)
We all know, we ask why but know the answer...
Hugs
Love and Light
Lily |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
6/11/2013 |
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oh the emotion engaged within
these lines is heart wrenching
how many of us have left & too
been left...but how awesome Dr. Hook is
you'll find "Better Love Next Time"
Song Thongs & New Heels
Vickie
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
6/11/2013 |
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Hopefully it wasn't just a passing fancy...it's sad when love is one-sided...nicely penned, Deborah...
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| Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill |
6/11/2013 |
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Lovers who leave us hanging...sometimes increases our desire. Beautiful questions asked in the interim!
Peace,
Dayvid |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
6/11/2013 |
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Reads like your lover was a tramp.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
6/11/2013 |
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I can relate so well to this. I hope it all works out the way you want it to and if it doesn't I pray you a speedy healing.
Love ya!
Jane |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
6/11/2013 |
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| Glad I never had to experience such a loss of love, it would have devastated me. Powerful poetry that grabs at the heart and won't let go. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/10/2013 |
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I am living this at this very moment. Thank you, Deborah. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
6/10/2013 |
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D.L.,
Unfortunately as you said, this is true for many. So sad.
Many blessings,
+Linda |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
6/10/2013 |
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i hope the answer was the one you want
budd |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
6/10/2013 |
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| Such heartache within the lines of this very sad, but somehow the words you write are not written with complete defeat. You have gathered lines of wanting and hope within the questioning of "You said you loved me." Beautiful, Deborah. |
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