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In the Dark
by D. L. Vaineo

Monday, January 26, 2015
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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They sat by the bar
To the band
One took the other's hand
Jell-o shots
Is what they were drinking
The one wanted
To sit at a table
She wished
To stay where she was
Finally she was persuaded
That table was way in the back
In the dark
For those who wanted
Let's just go home
No, said the other woman
It is the excitement
Of doing something
In the open-
They started out
With kissing and then-
Zippers opened
Hands entered
Giving relief
In the dark

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Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 1/28/2015
Wow one sensual poem you know how to do this!!!!
Peace, love and light,
Reviewed by Michael Schafer 1/28/2015
That's what you call spicing it up, and that's how to spell relief.

Michael D.
Reviewed by Christine Volkoff 1/28/2015
Jello shots??? Never done that! A curious drink, but the effect seems to be a good one...Nice, fun write.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 1/27/2015
Very sensual and real. Well penned Deborah.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 1/27/2015
Love this, Deborah; it is passionate and enticingly engaging too. Love and best wishes,

Reviewed by Carol Phelan Aebby 1/26/2015
Smiles! What a giving relief in the dark!

Wishing creativity and bliss!

Carol Phelan Aebby
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 1/26/2015
I'm all eyes, ears, and hands for this one! Naughty naughty…


PS. Never had a Jell-O shot. How do you drink something that you have to eat with a spoon because you can't eat it with chopsticks? ;-)
Reviewed by George Carroll 1/26/2015
There is no end to amusing ourselves.
Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci 1/26/2015
Just doin' what we do. 'Loved it!

Love ya!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 1/26/2015
Danger makes it all the more exciting.
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