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It's all about me
by Judine B Slaughter
Sunday, September 15, 2002
Not rated by the Author.
Old Me There once was a girl,
With very pretty curls,
Right at the nap of her neck.
When she was happy,
She was very, very happy.
But, when she was sad,
She was a wreck. New Me There once was a lady
With very lovely locks
Hanging down her neck.
When she was good
She was very, very good.
When she was bad
She said, "What the heck!" |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
2/5/2009 |
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I appreciate your "take" on things, Judine. Thanks for sharing. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Chris Wright |
1/19/2009 |
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| I hope that activator didn't turn your avatar's hair the color purple. You know how we gotta be careful with that stuff. I thought your poem was all about being real. I think we have to quit worrying about stereotyping our shells. We can't be perfect and we really can't be totally bad. I honestly believe that we are a freestyle. The soul it self is a freedom. Worries, doubts and lack in confidence only become our bars. So like you said the heck with it. Let get crunk on life and enjoy each day God wakes us up to use activator on our hair so we can get that shine on! This work was real nice one sista! |
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| Reviewed by William Heffner |
12/1/2003 |
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Thanks for sharing Judine.
God Bless You and Your Loved Ones
Officer William Heffner |
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| Reviewed by Afrika Abney |
10/16/2002 |
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Well done.
Afrika M.A.Abney |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
9/16/2002 |
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| this was absolutely adorable, judine!! :) love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg |
9/15/2002 |
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| Cute write. |
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