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under the microscope of scrutiny shackled to a bed with uncertainty hid a sales man's truthful psyche as all the doctors wonder, what is likely
and with a watchful eye of concern each stranger waited for their turn palpitating his mind with skill yet still unable to decipher his will
trapped inside was a burrowed thought doubt inflaming itself until overwrought machismo cracking daily from shame until denial looks for others to blame
in the end opportunity was robbed of its day as insanity found a way to stay hide in the darkness of a man's true feeling escape the cuckoo’s nest without any healing
copyright © 2004 Sara Coslett
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| Reviewed by Ian Thorpe |
3/23/2004 |
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Another good one
Ian |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
3/22/2004 |
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This screams of enabling! "escape the cuckoo’s nest without healing".
Hope someone gets the message.
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
3/21/2004 |
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| Sara, I'm glad to see that you are okay. Lisa |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/20/2004 |
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I agree with Regis....disturbing,,,,but glad to see you back!!
Everything okay?
Warm Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/20/2004 |
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| Disturbingly mind-grasping, Sara. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
3/20/2004 |
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| I know that nest. Great job! |
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