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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
4/27/2004 |
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| lovely |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
4/27/2004 |
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Is this the box where I get to breath again? Dorien, this was perfect poetry.
I know you must have whispered these words, for I heard them on the morning horizon.
Excellent work. Lisa |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
4/27/2004 |
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| Yup sea wash's away anything in the sand, fragile like life.. |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
4/27/2004 |
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Wow..I loved this, powerful and excellent,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
4/26/2004 |
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| "writing sea thoughts" - much appreciated these thoughts. |
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| Reviewed by William J. Cryer (Reader) |
4/26/2004 |
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| Powerful. Interesting choice for a pen name. Could it be the artistic reflection of Dorian Gray, or Oscar Wilde-or maybe both, if there is even a difference. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/26/2004 |
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Superb poem, vibrant images too good to let wash away;-)
We never know how wonderful memories are until we don't
have them. |
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