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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
8/25/2004 |
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excellent write, dear abdi-noor! o, how i pray for peace for y'all and your nation! god bless you and somalia! may peace soon reign upon your country!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :( >tears <
continued prayers to y'all... |
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| Reviewed by Ann Piatt |
8/25/2004 |
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This is an extremely powerful piece! I was glued and awed by your words. Very well done.
Ann :) |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
8/25/2004 |
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| Love the way you share your thoughts with such strength and compasson. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
8/25/2004 |
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AbdiNoor I'm praying your hopes and prayers are answered!
I'm excited for you and your country, and pray it will get
a good start and all the help it needs! Blessings to you and yours! |
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| Reviewed by Safi Abdi |
8/25/2004 |
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Salaam!
This is from the heart, you echo my own feelings. May Allah guide us all! Wasalaam!
Safi
P.S. Check out "I am a Somali child" |
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
8/25/2004 |
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| wonderfully written, full of hope and optimism mixed with a healthy dose of reality |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
8/25/2004 |
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(((abdi-noor)))
"...i raise my voice. many hear my cries
but very few share the pain with me..."
o, dear (((brother))), this is powerful, heartwrending...no one can truly know unless they are where you are...or unless you keep raising your voice. keep shouting--you are being heard by many here at AD, and above all, by God.
((((((HUGS)))))), love and continued prayers, your sister, karla. :( |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Richerson |
8/25/2004 |
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I raise my voice. Many hear my cries
But very few share the pain with me
I am borrowing light from the dark
I am begging strength from the weak
And never give that striving up. Never. Regardless of what comes forth. |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
8/25/2004 |
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"Let's Not Bury The Unborn" is a Voice for fairness... Impressive poilitical for Justice.
It is up to the people to decide whetther they want to remain slave of forged leaders, or stand up for Justice and build a country of human beings.
Never rest Your pen, Sublime Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
8/25/2004 |
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Such a powerful and outstanding poem, heart-wrenching and so deep,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
8/25/2004 |
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I raise my voice. Many hear my cries
But very few share the pain with me
You raise your voice well, Abdi-Noor. Hope many listen to your cries. |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
8/25/2004 |
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You have your heart set on a government, I wish you luck. I enjoyed the heartfelt expression.
"In free governments the rulers are the servants and the people their superiors and sovereigns." - Benjamin Franklin
I hope the people of your nation are able to take their rightful place. |
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