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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
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| Another unique and powerful write, Dawn, that draws some fine analogies here. You capture our minds and attention - but also our hearts. The visual is amazing: is it a trompe de l'oeil that the eyes actually move? Very clever! Bless you, too, for the beautiful message you sent - a real bouquet, thank you! Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
9/10/2004 |
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Very creative write Dawn!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
9/10/2004 |
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(((dawn)))
words to the wise, from the wise--excellent! thank you
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
9/10/2004 |
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We have to survive on our wits and instincts...hone them well...
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Phillip William Allen |
9/10/2004 |
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| Hints to the wise are sufficient. Well Done |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
9/10/2004 |
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| Love the style you have used here in sharing your thoughts. Great write! |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader) |
9/10/2004 |
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| This is extremely original with powerful truths within. |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
9/10/2004 |
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| Yup most unique, and a cool metarphor |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
9/10/2004 |
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| I agree with Lori it is very creative and unique. |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
9/10/2004 |
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| Another creative write. Excellent. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
9/9/2004 |
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Very keen observations, composed into excellent poetry, Dawn!
I especially like:"Life
makes a way
for those who
flap their wings,
to fly" |
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