|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Another unique and powerful write, Dawn, that draws some fine analogies here. You capture our minds and attention - but also our hearts. The visual is amazing: is it a trompe de l'oeil that the eyes actually move? Very clever! Bless you, too, for the beautiful message you sent - a real bouquet, thank you! Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Very creative write Dawn!!
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
words to the wise, from the wise--excellent! thank you
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|We have to survive on our wits and instincts...hone them well...
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|Hints to the wise are sufficient. Well Done|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Love the style you have used here in sharing your thoughts. Great write!|
|Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)
|This is extremely original with powerful truths within.|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Yup most unique, and a cool metarphor|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|I agree with Lori it is very creative and unique.|
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Another creative write. Excellent.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Very keen observations, composed into excellent poetry, Dawn!
I especially like:"Life
makes a way
for those who
flap their wings,