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Observations
by Heathyre A Perara
Friday, September 10, 2004
Rated "G" by the Author.
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seeing is believing...
within the walls of deception
one can find truth
hidden amongst the truth
lies certain falcities
one can find within the falcities reality
and from our reality
we find the illusions of fantasy
with fantasy there lies delusion
through delusion we find our guide
...a spirit...our angel
through our angel we find truth
yet with truth we are blocked
by walls of deception
and tainted by certain falcities.
we dream and find illusions of fantasy
and delusion...
and hope...
our guardian...
...by believing one sees
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
9/10/2004 |
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Yes Heath..It is good to believe in Angels..
Exceptional composition..
Good to have you back Heath...
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger |
9/10/2004 |
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| Poet, an exceptionally well-crafted complex descriptive composition, which illustrates one’s quest who seeks the answers to find harmonic balance through the truth, yet is continually redirected by the gift of sight, not wisdom. Thank you for sharing it. Take care and be well. |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
9/10/2004 |
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| It seems to be one vicious circle. |
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