|Reviewed by J.L. Day
|Mesmerizing! I look forward to reading your works, I am learning SO much! Reading MY attempts just shows how NOT to write, yours is enlightening and gives one hope for what COULD be....|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|DE- LIGHT - FUL !!! Should be a Hans Christian Andersen tale... can just see this illustrated, like The Little Mermaid. Mwah! Adore the quote too... life is measured by the quality rather than the quantity of moments - and this one is magical. Top drawer write of the bottom floor (of the ocean!) TY Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Oh splendid poetry!!
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|I love this one : ) Absolutely beautiful!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a magical and beautiful poem ...|
|Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook
|Too lovely for words!
In a class of its own.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Ahhh indeed. Quite a delectable read. Thanks for the hand sign signals. Been practising for the last hour.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Bravo bravo bravo, this is in my mind at least, your finest write. It captures the magic, the wonder and the beauty that we once saw in the stars and perhaps now will look for again. Thank you for sharing.
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
A wonderful metaphysical write that has distinct shades of the Rubaiyat of Omar Khayyam
This superb composition lights up the Den tonite !
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|If the stars go beneath the sea, where does the sun rest...it would be put out if it were in the sea, wouldn't it...? Ed|
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|Was wondering the very same thing, Anita. Read this aloud-very beautiful. Consider sharing it on podcast, will you? Created from
the stars we are birthed in sea. Perhaps our dreams wait there for us...
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|You convinced me;-) Beautiful poem A~ this creates a bit of magic!