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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
9/14/2006 |
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Someone describe love to me this way:
"Love has a different tune: I love you, therefore you are free to do as you wish. My love says you cannot do any wrong in my sight. My love says you cannot hurt me for it would not wish to make you responsible for the way I feel. My love says I am here for you if you want me, or I can be gone if that is what you wish. My love does not depend on your performance to exist - it depends entirely on a choice I make, moment by moment. My love accepts that you may even come to hate me for what I am and it is strong enough not to compromise itself to please you. My love cannot be manipulated. My capacity to love is infinite and is not bound by your feelings or desires."
Your poem reminds me of this. Thank you, Mark. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Cynth'ya cynthyaspeaks@gmail.com |
9/3/2006 |
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To my inter-poetic-galactic Brother Mark; Between you and Aberjani, we don't need rocket ships to get us to a higher plane of thought when it comes to the simple facts of how life should be explored.
Keep rising to brand new literary heights, I truly enjoy your work. . . so colorful in more ways than just visually.
blessin's, missed coming here. . . I think I need to track you!
cynth'ya lewis reed |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
9/3/2006 |
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aaaaaaaaaaaah..my kinda poetry..I'm so happy YOU LOVE!
Now you know of what I write,
have written
and will forever write..
the LOVE of the TWO-IN-ONE!
Blessings..
superb write..I've saved this one .
Vesna |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
8/3/2006 |
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| an eloquent expression of love ... |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
7/31/2006 |
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| Words for a soul mate to cherish. :-) |
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| Reviewed by Divinity 11 |
7/31/2006 |
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| Beautiful :) |
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| Reviewed by Aberjhani |
7/30/2006 |
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This joy-filled shower of unconditional love called I LOVE YOU, pouring like rain through the poet's illuminated heart, is the perfect cooling counterbalance to the heated fury of war and rumors of war currently dominating the human landscape. Much gratitude for sharing these lines with the world--
Aberjhani |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
7/30/2006 |
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You didn't say 'I love you' to her enough? Didn't write a poem to 'her?' I've been guilty of that. It happens to men.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Huda Orfali |
7/30/2006 |
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lucky her, Mark
and luck you :)
Very beautiful poem
thanks for sharing
love and peace |
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| Reviewed by Missy Cross |
7/30/2006 |
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| Wow Mark. This is divine music and pure spirit transformed into paper and ink (or 0s and 1s). Just gorgeous! |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
7/30/2006 |
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Splendid offering!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Chrissy McVay |
7/30/2006 |
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| Wonderful! |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
7/30/2006 |
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I could feel the lines drifting off into the mist...
Elizabeth
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
7/29/2006 |
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| Fantastic love poem. Enjoyed much |
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