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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
10/4/2006 |
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| Lovely. I see your artist's eye in this. ~~Nordette |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
10/4/2006 |
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An innocent child with a playground of wonder to wander--squeak, squeak.
Why am I thinking Half Moon Bay south of San Francisco?
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
10/4/2006 |
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Susan
It felt like a surreal walk in Sleep Hollow..
Very atmospheric and animated..
Shalom
Peter |
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| Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson |
10/4/2006 |
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Excellent writing Susan...it truly gives the feel of the area though I have been unable to tear myself awy from the miles and miles of desolate beach and dune. There are so many things to explore in this wonderful land, and nary enough time to do so...yet there is always hope...thanks for opening the eyes of this traveler...well done piece.
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
10/4/2006 |
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Ah ... the innocent eyes of a child.
How much wonder there was in life when we were young and unsullied in spirit and soul. Such depth you plumb in your soul Belle when you write, and seemingly so effortlessly too.
Such a heart as yours knows no bounds ...
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/4/2006 |
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I concur, Susan, a wonder you have created in verse; BRAVA! A masterpiece, indeed.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
10/4/2006 |
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Susan,
A poet lives for the one that will really touch the heart of another. Congratulations! this one is a masterpiece. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/4/2006 |
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The simplicity and virgin honesty of this poem as seen through both the child's and the adults eyes is intense and startling. Susan this one makes me want to be there walking, watching, laughing and appreciating the beauty of your home and of this child. Sweet.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
10/4/2006 |
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An awesome write Susan
Beautifully expressed
Loaded with lovely imagery
Love & Peace
William |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
10/4/2006 |
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Very beautiful Susan!!
love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Pierre Ortega |
10/3/2006 |
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What beautiful pictures you paint, with every stroke of your pen.
and this is no exception. amazing Pierre. |
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| Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) |
10/3/2006 |
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| You are quite a poet Susan. This was particularly brilliant. Victor. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/3/2006 |
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| you're a natural poet, Susan ... your imagery flows effortlessly ... |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sonnen |
10/3/2006 |
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| not only have you told us of time spent, but you shared the ambiance and the feelings...I love this! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/3/2006 |
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Susan this leaves me breathless in awe of your way with words! when you write like this. They just bubble forth like a bottle of champagne let loose to flow with delight! A keeper and exceptional beauty!Thank you!
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader) |
10/3/2006 |
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Sounds like a glorious Heaven there Susan..Stunningly beautiful..Makes one feel a sense of innocents and grace up above..Thank you..
Love,
Dove |
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