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| Reviewed by Axilea MU |
2/24/2010 |
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Lines angles and curves to lose ourselves.
I hadn't read any of your work lately...
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
2/19/2009 |
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The poem is the straight line with the illustration picture being the tangent, with an air of the top end of a violin giving a softly hight C, like a spider's tread to captivate yet not making the reader a prisoner.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
2/17/2009 |
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Great poem.I enjoy reading it,take care
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| Reviewed by William Haynes |
12/3/2007 |
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This I enjoyed also but oddly I did not see what the others who commented saw. I guess I'm a romantic at heart and read this as a tale about a lover who betrays with their words.
elliott |
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| Reviewed by Robin Ouzman Hislop |
9/18/2007 |
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Fascinating poem, the allusion to the painter and the canvass
too is very compelling |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
11/20/2006 |
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An accomplished poetic piece... "Asymptote" glows.
Long healthy creative life, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
11/14/2006 |
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| Like the tightrope clean lines of this one, Dawn, which are as a springboard to all the angles and curves that exist in potential. Like rods of iron before they are wrought. Elliptical and thought-expanding write. TY K xx |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
11/9/2006 |
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Free verse...my favortie...and a good one.
Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
11/6/2006 |
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Kinda like the vanishing point of two parallel lines... cept ones curved here I guess one is one a downward spiral here.
The for the brain gymnastics, now I need a kip.. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
10/24/2006 |
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Thank you for sharing this poem and for teaching me a new word, Dawn. Love and peace,
Regis |
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