by Susan K. de Vegter
Friday, December 29, 2006
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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I lie among tasseled brocade, enhale the passion love has made
I feel your form break through the air and suddenly, you're standing there
I sense your shadow, grab my brush, I draw a line of love for us
The form with sabled bristled flow is tribute to the love that grows
The next smooth stroke is your eyes, appear half closed, my passion flies
Just then a flow of fuller lips, bend to collect your kissing sips
Bristled golden moonlit night, shines upon this passion bright
Added blues to softer shades, deep within where pleasure's made
Hidden down with treasures deep awaiting plunges, fluids creep
Deep within the sweep of red, nerves launch flesh to breath instead
Keep the rhythm hearts partaking, color hunger as it wakens
Oranges and magentas flowing into fruity peaches glowing
Flesh tones fading then turn rosy, flash of mountain laurel poseys
Dandelion, yellowed hair, titanium porcelain, skin so rare
Kissing dots upon each ripple, hardened berries of crimson nipples
Billowed melons flesh so sweet, tender juices, a lover's feast
Legs of salmon-colored skin opening where love begins
Freckled, seinna spots, laced about with passion, hot
The absolute and firm request from eager urges, better, best
Legs entwined once they merge licking smells and arching curves
Sensual flames that beg "Come Near!" Gently passion speaks, "I'm Here!
Opened vees that hug your line ,splashed on juices... bold to fine
Sketched with colors of their fashion, glowing canvas, sabled passion.
Author ~ Susan Kathryn de Vegter
(c) copyright, 2006 (all rights reserved)
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|Reviewed by Dark Knight
|wow Susan your poetry drew me in and I didn't want it to end-lovely|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Sure drew a line of love for us... wow!
|Reviewed by Randall Barfield
|a lot of images and messages in this one--it really sizzles from waist down (middle)! "where love begins" i think is interesting...what kind of love? cheers|
|Reviewed by Butch Howard
|Compelling passion penned across a "glowing canvas."
"I feel your form break through the air and suddenly, you're standing there"
I really like that line...
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Love Tinka :)
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Quite a glowing canvas!|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|No blood-letting here, just pure passion and sweetness on the canvass of life . . .|
|Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
|Passion indeed, Susan...this one is lush and alive with it. Hmmmm, I'm inspired to dust off my brushes...and I know just the subject. You've got a yummy masterpiece going on here, brimming with positively voluptuous imagery!
Love and a Happy New year,
|Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
|Had to catch my breath... This is too good.... As always I'm in awe
of your way with words, But this goes beyond... really enjoy this I'm reading it over and over. The Invocation of passion... Love Pierre.
|Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
|Love tastes like a festive dinner. Lovely poem. Victor|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|sumptuous sensual and passionate imagery, make a marvelously stimulating poem, Susan ...|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|outstanding poem! Sensuality permeates the atmosphere so strongly it comes right through the monitor;-)! Awesome write Susan!
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Such sacred sensuality that flows like the painted images you stroked on this lighted canvass for our pleasure. Thank you for such an awesome and passionate write.
|Reviewed by H Cruz
|Wow! You caused a chemical reation; I'm melting...:)|
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Well, that certainly warmed up my living space a bit!! Beautiful hues of passion flow through your verses and paint the canvas with romance. Very nice!!
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|Magnificent! Truly, what an exquiste masterpiece, love Holly|