Ah! Desert, we are not.
by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Saturday, February 03, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
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A river
runs through
their heart
but yet
their throat is dry.
Their belly
has flattened out,
and their lips
are torrid and dry.
A dead lad
lies next to the door.
Several steps later,
a dead girl over the corridor.
As we stroll,
the toll mounts:
10, 15, 25, 30……
Some are young.
Some are old.
Some are black.
Some are white.
Some are nothing
but skeletons;
Others are
muffified corpses,
skin over ribs
like earthworm
over baits.
Some are
much newer,
-bloating corpses.
Their eyes
- star of the death,
dazzling but dry.
There exist
their remnants
and dikes of vent
-overlain by lavas
and the strata of death.
Ah! Desert,
it is just
- a symbol.
We are
the desert.
Desert, we are.
Our mind is dry
Our heart is dry
Our civilization is dry
Our ethics are dry.
We are dry.
Our laces of love
are becoming less dense
very much like a
broken palate of our sense.
We are
the desert.
Desert, we are
but not a cactus
blossoms in our core.
Ah! Desert,
we are not.
We are just
the greedy mirage
shining momentarily
over the desert of time.
We are not
a desert.
Desert ,
we are not.
We are,
“the deserts desert,”
Yes, that is what,
we really are.
We are dry
We are dry
We are so dry
We don’t hear their cries.
Our compassion
has died.
We are a ghost
in the human form,
under our body lie
sadistic sheets of imp
of thousand meters thick.
Copyright 2007 Bhuwan Thapaliya
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
2/15/2007 |
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Some morals are dry, dry to the core
Great Message!
I like your style Bhuwan
SPeaking OUT!
WArmly, WArrior Sheeeooxx |
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| Reviewed by Chrissy McVay |
2/11/2007 |
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Very vivid. And yes, it seems 'ethics are dry'.
Chrissy |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
2/4/2007 |
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| Interesting use of language. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
2/4/2007 |
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| a disparaging landscape of death and malaise you described in this very powerful write ... |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
2/4/2007 |
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A dried out compassion withno life left. Stunning warning.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
2/3/2007 |
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| Enjoyed |
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| Reviewed by J M |
2/3/2007 |
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A perfect poem on the present condition of this worlds nations and peoples. You have penned a reality most on the whole picture will not see but from the Heavens Throne is seen this so clearly. We can be filled with living waters from the Creartor his free will drink is for unto the healing of nations and its people.
Thank you for this powerful and spiritual poetry.
Light & peace to you Poet Bhuwan
Blessings,
Joselyn |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
2/3/2007 |
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| enjoyed immensely... |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
2/3/2007 |
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A well-described piece. Powerful horrific imageries!!!!!! I hate wars!!!!!
Sandie May Angel :o( |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/3/2007 |
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OMG this is so very touching Bhuwan...war and greed sucks bigtime!!
Love Tinka |
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