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| Reviewed by jeanne watson |
2/24/2007 |
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Bill,
Simply and direct observations ... all three of which add up to a timely bit of wisdom. I like the way you've captured significance using a very simply approach. Indeed a nice write.
...jeanne... |
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| Reviewed by Taylor Ryan |
2/22/2007 |
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You know, Bill, I really like the way you look at life...clean and simple. I wish I could capture a slice of it with fewer frills and a shorter gestation period.
When "response leads into responsibility". I call that trust with a capital T...if only we all had such freinds and neighbors these days.And what ever happened to random human kindness when a simple gesture becomes a mercenary one and must be rewarded in prizes as opposed to a smile or a simple "Thank-you"? As for split second...well, you know, there's just no accounting for brains these days...just pray you keep outta the way.
Your words always enrich...
Love,
Taylor |
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| Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow |
2/22/2007 |
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| Your three notes offer us a vignette of life..the first of compassion, the second of understanding priorities, and the third is the perfect example 'you can't fix stupid'... I love all three of them!!! M |
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
2/22/2007 |
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wow lots here to speak on
the first filled with compassion
the second one is based with proper common sense
and the third a foolish wonder acted upon
all makes you think
enjoyed! |
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| Reviewed by Sharon Jordan |
2/22/2007 |
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Three notes with wisdom in each one.
Bless you,
Sharon |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
2/22/2007 |
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We observe life from different bodies but with the same eyes.
We are all flabbergasted at the foolishness of Man, at how little if weights a gesture of kindness.
The reader imagines looking down inside a basket with a few papers with random scribbled words, like an afterthought.
Georg |
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