|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Quite a storyteller you are, I can tell by this one. It is so entertaining I think any child would love it read to them.|
|Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
|Charming and amusing. R|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Clever verses, Randall. I like the way it flows. Imaginative! Thank you. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Sweet- a child would!
I smiled myself~
WArmly, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox
|Reviewed by jude forese
|fun poem, Ranall ... put a smile on me face ...|
|Reviewed by K. Mulroney
|LOL! Great job, perfect childrens piece!|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Delightful rhyme, humor well written!|
|Reviewed by Brett Moore
|Funny poem, Randall. When you mentioned Gatorade, I laughed. I knew you were having some fun with this.
|Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
|Enjoyed this much Randall...the teacher in me as well as a friend must say that I could envision this becoming a very cute childrens book that could teach rhyming words, which is a hard concept for young children, as well as teach maybe season, animals, the possibilities are endless! Great write!
|Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
|This was cute, Randall. The "child" in me loved it! I loved the rhymes too. They painted quite the visual picture.
|Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath
Smile, cute~I liked it!
Blessings to you Randall have a wonderful day.
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Imaginative poem, Randall! I enjoyed reading this! Excellent!
Blessings to you,
|Reviewed by Megan D'Souza
|This is a lovely poem.....real cute one for a child. Good imagination and the rhyme scheme is steady. I enjoyed reading this! Great Write!|
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
|I like the vision of mice with hammers! :)|