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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
6/16/2008 |
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| Quite a storyteller you are, I can tell by this one. It is so entertaining I think any child would love it read to them. |
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| Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine |
4/13/2007 |
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| Charming and amusing. R |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/8/2007 |
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Clever verses, Randall. I like the way it flows. Imaginative! Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
3/7/2007 |
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| Cute one. |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
3/5/2007 |
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Sweet- a child would!
I smiled myself~
WArmly, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/4/2007 |
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| fun poem, Ranall ... put a smile on me face ... |
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| Reviewed by K. Mulroney |
3/1/2007 |
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| LOL! Great job, perfect childrens piece! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
2/28/2007 |
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| Delightful rhyme, humor well written! |
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| Reviewed by Brett Moore |
2/28/2007 |
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Funny poem, Randall. When you mentioned Gatorade, I laughed. I knew you were having some fun with this.
Brett |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
2/28/2007 |
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Enjoyed this much Randall...the teacher in me as well as a friend must say that I could envision this becoming a very cute childrens book that could teach rhyming words, which is a hard concept for young children, as well as teach maybe season, animals, the possibilities are endless! Great write!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling |
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| Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle |
2/28/2007 |
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This was cute, Randall. The "child" in me loved it! I loved the rhymes too. They painted quite the visual picture.
Jill |
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| Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath |
2/28/2007 |
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Smile, cute~I liked it!
Blessings to you Randall have a wonderful day.
Sincerely,
~Gwendolyn
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
2/28/2007 |
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| very nice! |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
2/28/2007 |
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Imaginative poem, Randall! I enjoyed reading this! Excellent!
Blessings to you,
~Linda |
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| Reviewed by Megan D'Souza |
2/28/2007 |
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| This is a lovely poem.....real cute one for a child. Good imagination and the rhyme scheme is steady. I enjoyed reading this! Great Write! |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sonnen |
2/28/2007 |
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| I like the vision of mice with hammers! :) |
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