Join Free! | Login    
   Popular! Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry
Where Authors and Readers come together!


Featured Authors:  Denise Richardson, iJames Boyle, iPaddy Bostock, iBeverly Scott, iMs Beeds, iDarden North, iKevin Weeks, i

  Home > Vision/Metaphysical > Poetry
Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry     

Erin E Kelly-Moen

· + Follow Me
· Contact Me
· Books
· Articles
· Poetry
· News
· Stories
· Blog
· 1,673 Titles
· 11,091 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
Member Since: Oct, 2002

Erin E Kelly-Moen, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.

Featured Book
Wiggle Room (paperback and eBook)
by Darden North

While serving as an Air Force surgeon at the height of the Iraq War, Major Brad Cummins fails to save an injured soldier after successful surgery yet must mend the Iraqi ..  
BookAds by Silver
Gold and Platinum Members

Books by Erin E Kelly-Moen
Ugly Ego, Beautiful Id
by Erin E Kelly-Moen
Thursday, March 22, 2007
Not rated by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow
Recent poems by Erin E Kelly-Moen
•  Shallow Me Not
•  Decomposing Crystal Ridge
•  Copper Mountain's River
•  In a Poet's Eyes
•  The Meteorite and The Atom Bomb
           >> View all 1,663

Ugly Ego, reared inside, bares its teeth,
Recognized, slipping slyly past blind eyes.
Beautiful Id, girths its smile, slow-released,
Perceived-wise, skipping softly…

Fetid Ego, trapped inside, fangs its teeth,
Petrified, slipping slowly past old eyes.
Natural Id, earths its smile, time-released,
Vision-wise, slipping softly…

Dying Ego, wails inside, blunts its teeth,
Agonized, skipping swiftly past new eyes.
Cosmical Id, births its smile, death-released,
Freedom-wise, weeping softly…

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 3/22/07

Want to review or comment on this poem?
Click here to login!

Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Click here for your Membership!

Reviewed by Gloria Gay 3/24/2007
Amazingly original.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/23/2007
Thought provoking!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Leland Waldrip 3/23/2007
Interesting life-trip, Erin. Well done.
Love and {{[{{hugs}}}}},
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 3/23/2007

Regret? Perhaps...having lived, yet not lived...sad. Excellent, thought provoking excellence!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by F William Broome 3/23/2007
I had fogotten how deep and sensible you can be, Poet Friend.
This is remarkable in composition, and good enough for "in sight" storage. Tank you for sharing such thinking. - Bill
Reviewed by Paul Berube 3/23/2007

Excellent poem. You manage to take me through life in three verses.
Reviewed by CJ Heck 3/23/2007
Wow, Erin, this is deep, powerful. This will have many meanings to the myriad who read and study it. To me, I see a crotchety self-serving young man who has a good heart, but hides it. As he ages, he mellows, still hiding his heart, and in old age, dying, recognizes his mistakes, missing all he has lost, but too late, and he grieves from the soul. An excellent poem!
Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten 3/22/2007
In sense this too reminds me of where my head was at tonight writing "Bulwer's Bligh in Bed" but in another sense...of aging.
Enjoyed this side step into yet a different thought of same...
Love and Peace~
Popular Poetry (Vision/Metaphysical)
  1.  In An Instant
  2.  After The Blue Moon
  3.  Sad But True
  5.  Whispering
  6.  Seasonal Triumph
  7.  Windy Thoughts
  8.  Forever Seeds
  9.  Where Have All The Poets Gone?
  10.  The Art of Living

Telepathy Will Change Your Life by D.E.Z. Butler

A way to use your mind for silent communication. I have used the methods in the book and they work...  
BookAds by Silver, Gold and Platinum Members

Authors alphabetically: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z

Featured Authors | New to AuthorsDen? | Add AuthorsDen to your Site
Share AD with your friends | Need Help? | About us

Problem with this page?   Report it to AuthorsDen
© AuthorsDen, Inc. All rights reserved.