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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
4/15/2007 |
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| Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson |
4/10/2007 |
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This is good...never fought the stuff much till this year.
But I must say...old time winter is still alive and well.
Cold on the ocean tonight...BRRR |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
4/10/2007 |
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| What beautiful morphing it is, too. Like fairy dust! But the results in terms of producing the bountiful harvest and blessing is like golddust. We are presented with all the manifold beauty of Nature's treasure casket opened for us in your lines. Spring is the earth's organza and chiffon as she dresses up for the Summer Ball! :)) Taut lines as always, Susan. TY Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
4/10/2007 |
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So glad I don't suffer with a snotty nose and read eye when pollen fills the air!!
I thing life made me a tough cookie..lol!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Me Too |
4/10/2007 |
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Springtime beginning of rhyme
Summertime is such good times
Falltime is sometimes a crime
Wintertime death in its prime
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| Reviewed by Pierre Ortega |
4/9/2007 |
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Springtime is wonderful and a time that calls for our renewal in spite of all our faults and flaws, May all our shortcomings melt away to uncover the special love that lives within all of us. It's
a beautiful season and this is an awesome poem. Love, Pierre |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
4/9/2007 |
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Fear of pollen is overrated, as you most aptly describe. Like the bees, I love the stuff.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
4/9/2007 |
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Hachoo to you too Belle-o-the-pollen-dance. Finely written. The colors in the image are awesome.
Light and Wisdom ... |
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| Reviewed by Randall Barfield |
4/9/2007 |
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| well-done, i like 'as she pleases, tosses in a few good sneezes'. good write. congrats |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/9/2007 |
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Perfect !she says as she sneezes for the 10th time;-)I'll bear the sneeze as long as I can view the beauty of the trees! Superb poem Susan!
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader) |
4/9/2007 |
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| Such a good poem. In south Carolina we had that yellow pine dust to contend with. I don't miss that stage of spring but as this last week here up north Mother Nature throws a bit more of snow our way I surely long for that road in your picture. Lady J |
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| Reviewed by Nicky Goodman |
4/9/2007 |
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| Hi Susan, i really like your poem - spring sneezes, colourful, charming, and in allergy solidarity, a happy Easter to you, Nicky x |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
4/9/2007 |
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But underneath this powdered kiss
The seeds of fruited, bonding bliss
Nature shares her pallet well
She truly does! |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
4/9/2007 |
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Ah this warms my heart for winter gave us one last pounding here in Nova Scotia on Easter eve with a raging snow storm that dumped a foot of snow and cold high piercing winds more appropriate for Christmas. So your look at a warmer sunnier more colourful place is welcomed. Hugs Susan hope you had a great Easter.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by F William Broome |
4/9/2007 |
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A-a-a-a CHOO!!!! You, ah, tell, ah, ah, it well ! A-a-a-a CHOO!!!!
Enjoyed and agree. A-a-a-a CHOO!!!!
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
4/9/2007 |
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| The ease of the flow to this, pleases even if on sneezes, but a small price to pay, for the beauty of the season... |
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| Reviewed by Jeff Mason |
4/8/2007 |
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| Hold on a minute while i.. while i.... while.... A-CHOO! Sneeze. Nice Spring write about the rite of Spring. -- Jeff |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
4/8/2007 |
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Have allergies? I'm aorry. I have 'em too, never had 'em until I came to TEXAS. GRRR! Hope you feel better soon, Susan! Well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn (who knows what it's like. Allergies. ICK.). |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
4/8/2007 |
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sniff....yeah, it is springtime here in New Mexico too and the winds are high, blowing pollen everywhere. My eyes are swollen, nose running, coughing until I nearly gag and waking up at night just to breathe...all this, and I still love spring!!! Wonderful poem, Susan.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
4/8/2007 |
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(((Susan))),
Bless you. :)
Pollen is the sign that Spring has sprung; even though it makes us sneeze, the results are beautiful. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Hope you had a wonderful Resurrection Sunday! |
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