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| Reviewed by jude forese |
5/6/2007 |
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| it would seem her honey is not sweet enough to appease his sadness ... |
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| Reviewed by J M |
5/5/2007 |
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In this, short and yet profound observation of human lives you capture two unique views and emotions of life. The perception is outstanding the busy bees hive offers a small warning of split infinity. Well captured and scribed Poet Debashish!
Blessings,
Joselyn
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
5/4/2007 |
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Great imagery..
Happy to read you again...
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| Reviewed by Susan Sonnen |
5/4/2007 |
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I keep reading this over and over...wonderful imagery!
With love,
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
5/4/2007 |
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A refreshing and profound write...wonderful imagery within. Enjoyed this very much. Penned well!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
5/3/2007 |
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Excellent little number you have penned, Debs; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
5/3/2007 |
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| So refreshing to read you again, Debs... and what confidence to drop by with 21 words! All meaningful and none wasted. Very concrete, and a paradox to the title. The fancy footwork of bees can perhaps become very tiring for the beekeeper whose whistle wanes after having whistled long into a dappled wind. An impressionistic response, but there you go! :)) Wrote recently on the Language of Stone - reminds me somehow of my thoughts on the "inference of marble"... I'm very fond of your bee/honey writes... TY Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by ~ Chanti |
5/3/2007 |
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Those first few lines are intriguing. The last, enigmatic. Meaning will be ascribed subjectively by the reader. A good write!
Chanti |
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| Reviewed by William DeVault |
5/3/2007 |
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| there is something profound and fun here...I must think...I must think... |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
5/3/2007 |
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It is amazing how unaware we can be when we are so aware.......
Great write! |
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