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| Reviewed by nicole gordano |
9/29/2007 |
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| i was feeling sad, and after reading the poem it made me happy, it make me see hope. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
7/12/2007 |
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Great write La Belle!!
Lvoe Tinka |
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| Reviewed by George Thompson |
7/12/2007 |
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Excellent write and self-expressive. We don't like pain and this poem is fille with it; it can make us miserable. You're done something about pain by writing a wonderfu expose on missed love.
George |
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| Reviewed by E. Richardson |
7/12/2007 |
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| Belle, this is lovely!...the composition is beautiful, with a wonderful ballad rhythm...I can easily hear this done to music. |
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| Reviewed by Southern Comfort |
7/11/2007 |
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| You walk in grace, beauty and light! And are a joy to behold! LOVE YOU! SC |
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| Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk |
7/11/2007 |
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| Superb, you tell 'em LaBelle, outstanding write...((big smile))hugs, twinks |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
7/11/2007 |
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Excellent poem La Belle
Your on a roll...
I'm smiling for you, but I always smile...
when I'm not a pirate, he, he...
Hugs.... |
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| Reviewed by Tiana Jett (Reader) |
7/11/2007 |
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| I am printing this one, Belle!!! I lost my smile but with friends like you, I'm learning to smile again ... Love and Hugs - Tee |
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| Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) |
7/11/2007 |
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| Life is not looking back but looking forward. Great poem. Victor |
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| Reviewed by Lewis Findley (Reader) |
7/11/2007 |
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| Ever forward, dear heart. Ever forward |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
7/11/2007 |
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Very well done; love the words you use! BRAVA, Labelle!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
compelling piece! |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
7/11/2007 |
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Oh! walking on that trail, getting wet by so many tears, looking for someone that teach us how to smile again.
Beautiful!!!
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
7/11/2007 |
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La Belle Rouge,
Look at it on the positive side, you are writing beautiful poetry because of this loss. He was there for the exact amount of time he was suppose to be there. Tell your soul, that his soul has left the building and he ain't a comin, back!!! I have been in your shoes. It's been two long years of grieving the soul mate that wasn't ready. Soul mates can come and go, we have many, timing the key to successful uniting of souls. The timing was off this time, there will be another chance, perhaps in this lifetime, but more than likely not. Looking forward to your healing words of wisdom...they will be coming because you can only grow and learn from this experience..Peace lovely lady, you deserve much better..
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V" Moonstone |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
7/11/2007 |
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La Belle,
Beautifully penned; one feels your words, because they've been there. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by stan nassano |
7/11/2007 |
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Outstanding ,Belle.
Very well done,fine fine write. |
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| Reviewed by Ted Bossis |
7/11/2007 |
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| My senses tell me you are wonder-filled with beauty & will continue with it - {blessed} -love <>Ted |
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