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by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
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Little Johnny's just been told there is no such thing as Santa Claus. :(


Deer Santa,

My Sister just tole me your not reel!
Busted her in the chops.  Maid me feel
better, cos I know the truth.  Maid me
m a d.  Know Im not supposed to hit, she
had it comin'.  Im defendin you -
cos I know your reel.  Ain't you?  Have to
know.  Cos if your not, I'll be reel sad.
I have really tried not to be bad ...
All I want for Christmas is to know
if your reel or not.  Ive gotta go -

Tell Mrs Clause and the raindear Hi.

Love,

Little Johnny, age 5

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (11/24)



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Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
This was so cute, and I loved how you told it as a small boy would speak. Too bad the magic is replaced with the truth...but for those of us "big kids"....Santa will always exist!
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
How cute. And yes there comes that year where someone has to say it. Good write. Lady J
Reviewed by Carole Mathys
...I too, believe!
love and peace, Carole~
Reviewed by Keith Rowley
Inside the mind of the child - excellent meter and rhyme. Now go tell that boy it's a lie! Santa really does exist - I'm 50 and I know!

Keith

PS: Please also tell him that if he busts his sister in the chops again, I'll send the Necromancer or the Stealer to visit him on Xmas night!

Blessings
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
I never understood the inner wish of people that go telling children that this or that doesn't exist, they are like messengers of a devilish entity that thrives on making people unhappy.
Georg
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Well litle Johnie, sitting out at the Mall the past week or so I have been asked this question many times...and my answer is always "If you believe in me then I am real."
My two grandchildren both recognized me as being Poppy as soon as they saw me but...to them I was helping Santa out by filling in for him and they loved the idea that Poppy was Santa's helper.

Santa Fee
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
lol! Very cute. I came across this information at an extremely young age because I recognized my Uncle Jerry in the Santa costume. Thanks for sharing this~ Sheila
Reviewed by Mary Coe
Very cute!
Reviewed by William Bonilla
was never thought to believe ih Santa
Thought I preached to my children
Peace be with you

William
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
"I Believe"
Reviewed by Walt Hardester
When my daughter asked me about Santa, I said, "Do you really want to know? It might cut down on your Christmas gifts?"
She said, "Yeah tell me."
Boy, was I wrong!!!
It only upped the price of her gifts.
No more mystery, only requests.
Love,

Walt
Reviewed by Art Sun
poor little Johnny...

at least wait till he's older...

nice work, Karla...

enjoyed, Art Sun...
Reviewed by tammy mcglade
I loooooove it!!!! You totally captured the five year old mind.
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Tell Lil Johnny that in his heart is love and compassion, the very things that make Santa Claus real.

Love,
Susan
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
very sweet write
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Karla~

Now if THIS doesn't make your eyes water and your throat lump up, nothing will. Such a simple request from a young boy who only wants to know the truth about Christmas. Very well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

I hope Santa brings Johnny the answer to his sad question! And I hope Santa brings YOU what YOU want! :)
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Enjoyed this my friend, well done and cleverly written, I thought sure that two of my students were going to roll up and fight over the same topic the other day! Enjoyed! Keep on believing!
Blessings & Happy Holidays,
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
This is cute,t hanks for sharing, keep these coming and be blessed
God Bless
Michelle~
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