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Deer Santa
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Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Saturday, November 24, 2007
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Little Johnny's just been told there is no such thing as Santa Claus. :(
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Deer Santa,
My Sister just tole me your not reel!
Busted her in the chops. Maid me feel
better, cos I know the truth. Maid me
m a d. Know Im not supposed to hit, she
had it comin'. Im defendin you -
cos I know your reel. Ain't you? Have to
know. Cos if your not, I'll be reel sad.
I have really tried not to be bad ...
All I want for Christmas is to know
if your reel or not. Ive gotta go -
Tell Mrs Clause and the raindear Hi.
Love,
Little Johnny, age 5
(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (11/24)
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
11/27/2007 |
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| This was so cute, and I loved how you told it as a small boy would speak. Too bad the magic is replaced with the truth...but for those of us "big kids"....Santa will always exist! |
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| Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader) |
11/26/2007 |
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| How cute. And yes there comes that year where someone has to say it. Good write. Lady J |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
11/25/2007 |
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...I too, believe!
love and peace, Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Keith Rowley |
11/25/2007 |
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Inside the mind of the child - excellent meter and rhyme. Now go tell that boy it's a lie! Santa really does exist - I'm 50 and I know!
Keith
PS: Please also tell him that if he busts his sister in the chops again, I'll send the Necromancer or the Stealer to visit him on Xmas night!
Blessings |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
11/25/2007 |
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I never understood the inner wish of people that go telling children that this or that doesn't exist, they are like messengers of a devilish entity that thrives on making people unhappy.
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
11/25/2007 |
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Well litle Johnie, sitting out at the Mall the past week or so I have been asked this question many times...and my answer is always "If you believe in me then I am real."
My two grandchildren both recognized me as being Poppy as soon as they saw me but...to them I was helping Santa out by filling in for him and they loved the idea that Poppy was Santa's helper.
Santa Fee |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
11/25/2007 |
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| lol! Very cute. I came across this information at an extremely young age because I recognized my Uncle Jerry in the Santa costume. Thanks for sharing this~ Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Mary Coe |
11/24/2007 |
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| Very cute! |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
11/24/2007 |
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was never thought to believe ih Santa
Thought I preached to my children
Peace be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
11/24/2007 |
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| "I Believe" |
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| Reviewed by Walt Hardester |
11/24/2007 |
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When my daughter asked me about Santa, I said, "Do you really want to know? It might cut down on your Christmas gifts?"
She said, "Yeah tell me."
Boy, was I wrong!!!
It only upped the price of her gifts.
No more mystery, only requests.
Love,
Walt |
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
11/24/2007 |
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poor little Johnny...
at least wait till he's older...
nice work, Karla...
enjoyed, Art Sun... |
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| Reviewed by tammy mcglade |
11/24/2007 |
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| I loooooove it!!!! You totally captured the five year old mind. |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
11/24/2007 |
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Tell Lil Johnny that in his heart is love and compassion, the very things that make Santa Claus real.
Love,
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
11/24/2007 |
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| very sweet write |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
11/24/2007 |
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Karla~
Now if THIS doesn't make your eyes water and your throat lump up, nothing will. Such a simple request from a young boy who only wants to know the truth about Christmas. Very well penned; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
I hope Santa brings Johnny the answer to his sad question! And I hope Santa brings YOU what YOU want! :) |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
11/24/2007 |
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Enjoyed this my friend, well done and cleverly written, I thought sure that two of my students were going to roll up and fight over the same topic the other day! Enjoyed! Keep on believing!
Blessings & Happy Holidays,
Joyce B. |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
11/24/2007 |
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This is cute,t hanks for sharing, keep these coming and be blessed
God Bless
Michelle~ |
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