He Drove All Night
by Southern Comfort
Sunday, December 02, 2007
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Shay was like a fever in his blood, a woman that a man would move Heaven and Earth to get to her, so he drove all night to be welcomed into her embrace.
His cell phone rang and when he answered it he heard Shay's voice saying," Darling, come to me, I love you!"
Time, life and space had kept him from her, so this call meant everything to him.
Amid questioning voices, asking," Where are you going?",he ran to his car and vanished into the night.
He had made this journey to her, many times in his head, driving all night to be with the woman he loved.
Her voice and her image, caressed his body, making him rock hard, urging him on, as he cursed every mile that kept them apart.
He drove like a bat out of Hell, he would have moved Heaven and earth, to hold Shay in his arms.
Shay was his fantasy, the woman that had caused him sleepless nights and wet dreams.
He was like a man in a trance. Her voice, her lush body, aqua eyes and long, coffee colored hair, made him sigh and ache for her.
Shay haunted him, her warm ripe body, her Jasmine scent, the way she sighed, her breath and heartbeat, meant everything to him.
As he drove throughtout the night, his body was a coiled spring, ready to snap, his want and need for her was almost too much to bear.
As dawn was breaking, his love quest had ended, as he pulled up to her front door. The door opened and she stood there with her arms open, waiting to gather him close.
Her embrace was a Slice Of Heaven for the weary Knight, that had rode many miles to be held in her loving arms.
As their lips met they were consumed with passion and desire. Their two bodies melted together and their hearts united, now beating as one.
Music: I Drove All Night
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|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|filled with passion|
|Reviewed by Dee C.
|Such love melts the heart!!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|SIgh.....a moment I have been dreaming about for a long time,,,but fate once again was not on my side.....something that was suppose to be never happened...some people ..the luck is always on their side!!
Dreamlike offering....thank you!!
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Wow, a tale worth reading again for its love and passion. You have such a talent with words and wisdom, bless you....
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|A sweet passionate tale of love.|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|I hope he remember to take off that armor or it will be a couple of sopranos on that bed...
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Wow SC you've got my head in a whirl as I await my man driving home after being away, as I will greet him in the door with open arms, I sure hope he thinks of me as his Shay. A great write. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
Very descriptive and well written my friend. Blessings Always, Paul.
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|He should have..
Your an expert at these writes SC
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Wow...when love and passion stir these sy=trong emotions into acts like this it is truly amzing. Great write.