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Vulnerable
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Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Thursday, January 10, 2008
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One thin blanket is
all that separates my nakedness
from prying eyes -
please don't ask me to lower it.
(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (1/10)
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
1/16/2008 |
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I love the way you have so simply & poetically expressed vulnerability. I feel this way sometimes!
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
1/11/2008 |
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| Metaphorically genius Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
1/11/2008 |
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| Karla, a truly beautiful write. So much said in so few words. Your poetry just gets better and better. |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
1/10/2008 |
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I love this write, and that image is amazing
God Bless
Michelle~ |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
1/10/2008 |
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| wow--daring!! |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
1/10/2008 |
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OOOOHHHH! Daring write here Karla.
Love and blessings!
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill |
1/10/2008 |
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Great image, Kalra. It underlines your words well.
Love,
Becca~ |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
1/10/2008 |
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The graphic image that you have chosen very effectively serves to complement your message. Thank you, Karla. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
1/10/2008 |
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Wow this is kinda hot. I like it.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
1/10/2008 |
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totally fantastic pic and poem! You are on a roll Karla!
Love,
ET |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
1/10/2008 |
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NP!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
1/10/2008 |
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| OK |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
1/10/2008 |
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Don't need...I am already under it...
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Charlie |
1/10/2008 |
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| It is, like Karen said, painfully beautiful and vulnerable even in it's speaking of vulnerability. You are gifted. I know what you mean about the blanky being pryed away. It's painful. --Can't resist sometimes, though-- when there's a beauty there that just gleams through the thin fibers. I want to just peel down a corner and take a peek... and sometimes some revealed souls are not as forgiving as you... Love ya! --Charlie |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
1/10/2008 |
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Karla~
I won't ask for you to lower that blanket, but you need to take a good, hard look at yourself and try to figure out what's really going on inside. I am sorry you are feeling bad; you are indeed in my prayers! Please know I love you and care for you; you are a wonderful poet/photographer; don't let the comments of others bring you down. They don't know you like I do; they don't know any better. Just dust yourself off, try to move on. That's what you've told me. Don't be afraid; you write for YOU. Deep pain very well expressed.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
1/10/2008 |
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| Ah, come on, you know you wanna . . . Sure ya do . . . Gotta love it . . . |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
1/10/2008 |
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| I surely won't. It is truly up to each of us to decide just how much we wish to reveal to others. |
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