Make The World Go Away
by Southern Comfort
Wednesday, July 02, 2008
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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My Darlin, come find a haven in my arms,
Let us hide from the world and all that would harm.
Kiss me deeply, make me forget all,
Put me under your spell let me hear love's call.
I will cling to your strong body, like a clinging vine,
I want to feel loved and protected, enjoy that warmth so divine.
Cuddle me close, with my head on your chest,
Let us comfort each other and find sweet rest.
The world is so cold and mean, please make it go away,
The only world I want is this bed where we lay.
I want and need you to fill this ache,
I want to make love, just for passion's sake.
My nipples grow erect, begging for your lips,
My womanflower glistens with dew, awaiting your fingertips.
Is it a sin to want a man so much?
To glow and come alive because of your touch.
I am your willing Love Slave,
You are my drug of choice, what my body craves.
I know what it takes to make me complete,
It is simply you, My Sweet.
Music: Make The World Go Away
Thanks to all who read and comment
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
7/8/2008 |
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I agree, SC is coming back after a spell in a dark corner, sister your passion could be the one starting all those fires they talk about.
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
7/5/2008 |
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This is a gem SC! I love this beautiful passionate poem, I can feel the fire of your desire!
Write On!
Warmest hugs and Spiritual Love, Warrior Purple Passion Gypsy Lady Sheexooo
STay Positive! |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
7/3/2008 |
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I love how you write with no holds barred when it comes to the passionate embrace of love. Very nicely done my dear SC and is it getting hot in here?
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
7/3/2008 |
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Beautiful SC and often I feel the same so I have decided to only accept the good part of the world and all the love it has to offer. thank you for sharing and thank you for returning to us as we have missed you so very much SC. XOXO
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
7/3/2008 |
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S.C.,
Very gentle and sensual write. Quite romantic. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul. |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
7/2/2008 |
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Yes passion makes the world go away...I agree. Welcome back SC, sure have missed you darlin.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Walt Hardester |
7/2/2008 |
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I have to agree with LaBelle.
I missed my Sissy.
Thank you for coming back to us.
With such familiar ferver.
Walt
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
7/2/2008 |
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Sensually magnificent, with emotions that run deep....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
7/2/2008 |
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| Oh My, the old Southern Comfort is back and she looks so good in love. Enchanting romance SC. |
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