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Gettin' a Psychedelic Buzzzzzzz................
by Ed Matlack
Tuesday, October 14, 2008
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Been awhile,
Audiophile,
High by a mile,
Passin’ a doobie,
Enjoyin’ a smile…
Technicolorwebsite,
Colors abound so lite,
Nothing heavy, not tonight,
Oh yeah, oh baby, sirright…
Sorry this makes little cents,
Seeing multicolored tents,
Couldn’t if I wanted to, climb a fence,
Power shotgun making me more dense,
Nag Champa incense,
This high so freakin’ intense…
© ed [PEACE] 10/14/08 ®
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Technicolor web of sound
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
10/15/2008 |
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Thats psychedellic alright Ed better share some of what your on. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Tom Hyland |
10/15/2008 |
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ED - if'n you had any more BUZZZZZZZ - you'd be a BUMBLEBEE !!!
I'LL pass on the NAG - was married to one for 34 years !!!
Pax Tecum - TK.
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
10/15/2008 |
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| I hear you can even bathe in that Nag Champa - you might want to give that a try, Bro! |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/15/2008 |
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Been there done that and somewhere in a moth ridden box of memories is my own fringed raw hide vest, Jesus sandles and a tattered old Hendrix shirt... ah the good old days.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
10/15/2008 |
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It took two hours to take you down, we thought you would hit the moon!
Ed the Elder
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/14/2008 |
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darn it,i want some!why should you have all the fun...
rufuz nip his nose;-) |
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| Reviewed by Rene Swing |
10/14/2008 |
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Only you could write stuff like this....I liked it though. I have to admitt: I do love Nag Champa!!! Its my favorite!!!
Love...Rene |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/14/2008 |
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| gave me flashbacks, Ed ;) |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
10/14/2008 |
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| If this is the way you saw it so be it. Colors meant something to myu Tom too, but I really never found out what. I do he liked to put certain colors together and analyze them. He was a mighty colorful guy to be around at times. Wore his red vest til day he died, winter and summer. I used to get so mad at him in summer for not putting it away. But he did his thing too. |
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| Reviewed by Scott Zachary |
10/14/2008 |
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What the hell is "audiophile"? And what is "Nag Champa"? It must be good whatever it is.
More dense? Is that possible?
Pass the jay, bud! You Bogart'er.
Truly enjoyed your poem, buddy!
Scott |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie May |
10/14/2008 |
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| Oh brother, what a write my friend. Laughed my socks off. You are truly something ya know that? Funny write my friend. Hope you come back to earth soon. Love, Bonnie |
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